Reviews for The Other Law
| amsev | 2007.06.26 - 01:03AM | 2: Turn the Frown Upside-Down | Signed |
| Great start. Fave line thus far "It seemed the people most tolerant of his presence were also the people who were constantly wanting him to grin like an idiot." LOL! |
| Shiro Ryu | 2007.06.25 - 11:37PM | 2: Turn the Frown Upside-Down | Signed |
| The story is looking good so far. I am definitely left wondering what set Severus in such a bad mood when he arrived at the end of the second chapter. I hope to read more soon and find out. |
| drakien | 2007.06.25 - 11:37PM | 2: Turn the Frown Upside-Down | Signed |
| YAY UPDATE!! I'm really enjoying watching this story develop. Can't wait to see what's next! |
| Darque Hart | 2007.06.25 - 10:28PM | 2: Turn the Frown Upside-Down | Signed |
| There's a lot more she could have ironed out! She hit some good ones, but, oh, there are more!
I don't suppose you could make the chapters a little longer? [This chapter could have covered a lot more ironing outs] ;) |
| Kitty Hawk | 2007.06.25 - 09:25PM | 2: Turn the Frown Upside-Down | Anonymous |
| I'm addicted! Update!
I love Empowered!Hermione who takes her own fate into her hands and willingly steps into the marriage with Severus. My favorite type of Fan!Hermione.
Good job and I can't wait for more! |
| Organic woman | 2007.06.25 - 07:59PM | 2: Turn the Frown Upside-Down | Signed |
| Oh my...this Snape seems to always have something tricky up his sleeve (just as a true Slytherin would); I'm glad you made Hermione witty and strong instead of the stammering and timid character so often invoked on her. Love the writing style and love the story. Can't wait for more! |
| Drinking chocolate | 2007.06.25 - 07:54PM | 2: Turn the Frown Upside-Down | Signed |
| Ooh, snappy adversarial negotiations about -- oh -- asking each other to sleep together. Hot! [hoping fervently for a consummation chapter soon] |
| Losumi | 2007.06.25 - 07:41PM | 2: Turn the Frown Upside-Down | Anonymous |
| Oh, Severus Snape -- always testing the limits, that one. Isn't he! I am looking forward to Hermione parrying every test...she's holding up remarkably well so far! |
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