Reviews for The Other Law
Marianne | 2007.07.24 - 01:11PM | 4: Smirks and Smiles | Signed |
Funny story, this one. "A glower sent them running. Clearly, the end of the war had softened him. He would have to work on that." *ggg* |
June W | 2007.07.22 - 03:53AM | 5: Cloistering Hermione | Signed |
Yay Hermione for going for the kiss!! I just hope she understands the "gopher" reference - she was perfectly capable of getting her own drink, as well as one for him. Thanks for the new chapter! |
kallxmexkat08 | 2007.07.21 - 05:46PM | 5: Cloistering Hermione | Signed |
AHH!!! It's SO GOOD!!! EEK! I love how you wrote that Hermione had to be the brave one and reach up to Severus...while he did nothing. I love that part :)
Great job!
~Kat~ |
septentrion | 2007.07.21 - 04:59PM | 5: Cloistering Hermione | Signed |
That will give them food for thought. |
Black Aliss | 2007.07.21 - 02:34PM | 5: Cloistering Hermione | Signed |
So you want reviews do you? And plenty of praise? Perhaps some wheedling plea for MORE! OK..there it was!! You have such a knack for making the characters seem so perfectly spot on. I love your story and will waiting for the next update. Applause to you!!
Author's Response: Yes! Yes! Bless you and Thank you! I'm still recuperating from Deathly Hallows, but I hope to have something up soon. |
Nadrek | 2007.07.21 - 11:55AM | 5: Cloistering Hermione | Signed |
The gopher reference seemed obvious, actually.
Generally a good job, though I would have seen Severus responding by blowing the "invisible walls" down through power of magic, or by curse-breaking skills... or, preferably, by calling Fred and George over (who would, likely, come to see the trapped couple), and _then_ blowing the "invisible walls" down by sheer power, hopefully knowing the twins across the room. That he would kiss Hermione indicates his own preferences... though destroying the mistletoe and _then_ kissing Hermione, even briefly, would be entertaining.
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kittykat91419 | 2007.07.19 - 04:11PM | 4: Smirks and Smiles | Signed |
I do like this story. Thus far, it's quite cute. I'll keep checking for updates, if you keep on writing to make me happy :)
Author's Response: I'm still writing; the next chapter has been in the queue for a couple of days, so I'm hoping it will go up today. |
Nichalia | 2007.07.17 - 12:12AM | 4: Smirks and Smiles | Signed |
Oh my, yes, come back, inspiration! This is great! |
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