Reviews for The Other Law
| Crescentmoon | 2007.07.16 - 12:00AM | 4: Smirks and Smiles | Signed |
| This is super cute so far. Cannot wait to read more. :) |
| amsev | 2007.07.15 - 11:42PM | 4: Smirks and Smiles | Signed |
| Poor, ornery Snape! He just doesn't know what has hit him yet, does he? Looking forward to reading more. |
| oscarxena | 2007.07.15 - 11:37PM | 4: Smirks and Smiles | Signed |
I like that Hermione realises that she's coached Harry and Ron into becoming men and that Severus is displaying similar features to an adolecent boy. I'm sure she can get him to be a man (and it's not just about sex). Your inspiration is in a line you wrote where Severus think that he knows how to handle women.....let him find out how wrong he was. I can't wait for your update.
Author's Response: Yes! Thank you for reminding me what my focus was! I have a tendency to forget what point I was trying to make and what story I was trying to tell . . . . |
| aleatha5 | 2007.07.15 - 11:15PM | 4: Smirks and Smiles | Signed |
| I am really enjoying this story. I like your Hermione, she is down to earth and just as I imagine her -- very sensible. |
| kippie87 | 2007.07.15 - 10:58PM | 4: Smirks and Smiles | Signed |
| I love how Hermione deals with Snape... and yes he IS sexy!!! |
| LadyM | 2007.07.15 - 09:53PM | 4: Smirks and Smiles | Signed |
| I was surprised that S didn't take up H's challenge this morning and snog her senseless--but i suppose he'd need his wand to Legilimize her.
Lovely images. Lovely chapter. Come back, Muse! |
| Krum_lover | 2007.07.15 - 09:38PM | 4: Smirks and Smiles | Signed |
| Haha, ahh Sevie trying to make things more difficult then they need to be. Loving the story! Keep up the good work |
| Nadrek | 2007.07.15 - 09:35PM | 4: Smirks and Smiles | Signed |
| Interesting - the chapters are still shorter than I like, but it's interesting.
It looks like Severus is trying to remain in a bad mood, deliberately - throughout last chapter, and throughout this chapter. Now, if he can manage to enjoy himself and relax a bit at the same time, that would work out.
Severus did notice Hermione's wanton look in the morning, and clearly finds her attractive, which bodes moderately well for her chances of climbing on his lap to snog, perhaps after she finds the actual Firewhiskey glasses (Accio glasses... or perhaps Accio dirty dishes).
Severus - and, it appears, Hermione - being concerned about the whispers of students is not so promising... one might think that Severus could see it as an opportunity to take truly mind-boggling amounts of House points.
As the next scene with them together should be evening, perhaps we could see each of them starting to plot to "manage" the ministry in the future, and/or implement regime change, and/or simply get revenge - if there was one law directly against Severus, which failed, one would expect the specific members in the Ministry behind that law to come up with another law. |
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