Reviews for Of Debts and Debt Collection
| Pixie Dust | 2016.09.15 - 02:02AM | 41: Epilogue: The Accumulation of Small Acts | Signed |
| I just reread this, and it is amazing! I love how several characters were important to the final battle. You should continue writing. You are awesome! |
| marisamarinee | 2015.12.31 - 01:32AM | 4: Sins of the Father | Signed |
| I'm back for more. Had to reread the story!! |
| breastlady | 2015.05.25 - 10:40PM | 38: On the Eve of War | Signed |
| There must be enough of the Felixis potion for Severus to have some too, since next to Harry he is the one in the most danger of attack. Why haven't they decided to give some to Severus? Will Hermione be watching Harry's back or Severus'? If it was me, I'm bad. I'd figure everyone would be helping Harry so I would be helping Severus. And, I'd put some of that potion in his morning tea. |
| breastlady | 2015.05.25 - 09:19PM | 37: Of Debts and Promises Kept | Signed |
| Thank you for a lovely happy chapter before we get to the battle. I've never enjoyed authors that never provided an island of rest in the midst of horror. That's why I hate reading people like Terry Brooks, for example. |
| breastlady | 2015.05.25 - 02:58AM | 35: Darkness | Signed |
| This is the best chapter in this story to date. Well thought out. Perfect. It isn't that I was enjoying Lucius' suffering; I was enjoying Severus' Syltherin skills in the best possible way as he turned Lucius' mind in his favor thus creating the mad man into a tool against Voldi. He indeed is running both sides of this war. I am so glad he is on our side. You have shown that he is a true Master at his craft as a spy. I am impressed. As Ron would say, "Brilliant! Scary, but brilliant!" These are things I don't think Hermione is ready to know the details about this amazing man. |
| breastlady | 2015.05.24 - 03:51PM | 28: Secret Revealed | Signed |
| Are you happy now, Hermione? You ruined his surprise for you. He didn't get to finish the engraving because you were being a brat. You forced him to propose to you before he was ready because he wanted everything to be just right for you, but you had no concern for his feelings. You need a time out to think about what you've done, little girl. |
| breastlady | 2015.05.24 - 03:48PM | 28: Secret Revealed | Signed |
| Public humiliation as a way to manipulate one's beloved is not a desirable trait in a mate. While Severus has social issues he needs to improve, Hermione needs some serious couples counseling. She doesn't deserve him at this point. If she loves him she needs to protect him from humiliation. If she loves him, she needs to trust him. Grow up Hermione. Please send someone to counsel Hermione in how to treat one's beloved. Maybe Remus would be a good person to speak to her. The rest of the idiots that went to the second floor to watch are all behaving selfishly and immaturely. I would have hoped that someone among them would have said, "Come on you guys. This is none of our business and you are all acting like a bunch of silly 12 year old girls. Give the couple some privacy. How would you like it if you wanted to say something privately and everyone hounded you? This behavior is beneath us. Let's go back to the Great Hall and mind our own business." |
| barton | 2014.09.15 - 10:35PM | 29: Something in Common | Signed |
| great proposal! |
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