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| GreenGarnet | 2013.09.20 - 02:41AM | 1: The Sun Also Dies | Signed |
| This was excellent. The level of description especially in the seduction scenes and the sweeping drama scenes was unparalleled, and the humor had me laughing out loud - the Hufflepuff Cup scene, McGonagall's reactions to Snape's somewhat exuberant destructive impulses (or the destruction that seems to trail him...) - really just were very funny. The emotional context with Draco and Narcissa was really touching, and there were just a million other things - this was really, really well done. I went to bed at 5 am because I couldn't stop, and have come back multiple times because the seduction scenes that don't even bare a single hair are the sexiest that I've read. Bravo. Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for the awesome review. My apologies for your sleep loss. ;) I wrote Debts coming up on about 8 years ago and still love seeing folks make their way through such a monster. Love your comments about the seductions scenes. I was actually too chicken to write anything more explicit (writing "Close Your Eyes" made me shake actually). I got a bit braver later on (See Entrance Hall for the alternate version of one of the scenes) and also Independent Study. Even then, you are correct, not a thing is explicit and that's how I like it. We all have better imaginations. :) Thank you so much! | |||
| ASchaffalit | 2013.08.03 - 10:15AM | 28: Secret Revealed | Signed |
| Oh, she is horrible, cruel, pushing the man to his limits in Front Of everyone. She is so selfish, The Great Goddess Hermy does not have to have an answer wrung from him. He gives her more true honesty and openess than she sometimes deserves.. Well, written to make her chose to act so childlike and foolish, a teenager , full of herself. Deep bresth...then again, it was so romantic , oh such a wondrous proposal. and they all Care about them both -- Brava | |||
| ASchaffalit | 2013.08.03 - 09:33AM | 26: Summer Night | Signed |
| This description of the lonely spot, the snow- coloured blanket, his playfulness, her shy love, it made me breathe quietly, stop , and feel the deep satisfied hearbeat, when reading poetry.... this is one of te best, low- reviewed stories about H and S , Maybe because Quality needs experience to decifer, and recognise.
You are brimming with a vital, true understanding of all of these characters. Seeing this abandoned life transformed by tender love and all around him..
*exhales with pleasure*......
more than 10 Author's Response: Thank you so much. :) I'm flattered that you loved it so. | |||
| ASchaffalit | 2013.08.02 - 09:32PM | 8: The Best I Can Do | Signed |
| This is a true Snape- magnificent. Hermione is warm, smooth - thinking ,and loveable. Hm, kisses as help to a cure? Hm.. | |||
| strikesun141 | 2013.07.29 - 11:34PM | 41: Epilogue: The Accumulation of Small Acts | Signed |
| I can't recall if I've reviewed & mentioned this to you before, but I wanted you to know how much I adore this story. I stumbled upon it while it was on FF.net - at the time, I had never read/even imagined this pairing - and it became the reason that I began to ship these two characters. Every time I come back for another read, it's just as wonderful and refreshing as the first time...such a brilliant story. Thank you :) | |||
| xikum | 2013.07.04 - 11:43PM | 33: Close Your Eyes | Signed |
| This was beautiful! I could see Severus like that - as rigid as he is in his outer life, he needs someone in his personal life he can be soft with, loving, and his wife/lover should be 'the one'. | |||
| xikum | 2013.07.03 - 04:03PM | 12: Truth and Renovation | Signed |
| Excellent chapter!! I know that type of action is hard to depict & maintain. | |||
| xikum | 2013.07.03 - 01:31PM | 10: Off the Mark | Signed |
| Stunning picture, amazing chapter - horrible but it needed to be, to be something that would get rid of the Mark. I just hope so very much that Severus could just get over his stupid bias against Harry due to his appearance and his father - really, is he, the same as his own father? In any case, Harry never even knew James. sigh | |||
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