Reviews for Of Debts and Debt Collection
Ravyn | 2009.11.08 - 09:52PM | 20: Traitors and Payback | Signed |
Ilove the fact that you quoted Wesley from the Princess Bride, the best movie ever filmed! |
evenstar101 | 2009.09.28 - 08:19PM | 3: Reunion | Signed |
For some reason I never imagined Severus would disagree with Lily's choice to die for her son. I kind of figured he would do the same thing. It kind of made your Severus unlikeable to me, which is difficult because I love him! I'm still curious to see where this goes though. |
evenstar101 | 2009.09.28 - 07:48PM | 2: A Strange Homecoming | Signed |
I don't dislike the chapter in general, but I don't like how you had him sleeping for a week and the wounds still fresh. In canon JKR had it that Malfoy's arm was healed in a second after Buckbeak attacked him. There is nothing poisonous about a Hippogriff so I thought that was kind of strange. The shampooing was a bit much, but otherwise, good chapter.
Author's Response: Debts was my first attempt at writing anything, really and was started in September of 2005. I had no real plot starting out, and so yes, bent canon to get the premise going. If you can stick it out, I promise it gets better as you get deeper. Thanks for reading. Debts will always be dear to my heart. |
evenstar101 | 2009.09.28 - 06:15PM | 1: The Sun Also Dies | Signed |
Interesting start. I like how canon compliant you kept it. I have not read a lot of fics that actually attempt to exonerate Snape throughout the course of the story and am looking forward to seeing where this goes. |
azureavian | 2009.09.23 - 02:28AM | 40: The Final Battle II | Signed |
reviewy review: AH! ohhhh, yay! eek! oh no! yay! awww, wooo whoo!, Neville ::kissy noises::, Snape! ::more kissy noises:: yay! sniffle, sniffle yay!! |
azureavian | 2009.09.21 - 02:19AM | 13: Shadows | Signed |
Love this story, I've put it in my favorites. I like the tone of the people and the storyline is completely believable. |
Majenta | 2009.09.09 - 06:41PM | 21: With a House-Elf by my side | Signed |
This is a fantastic story. I love the way you don't make life easy for either Hermione or Severus. Bella surely is one nasty piece of work, Severus should have finished her off properly as soon as he had the chance. Off to read next chapter now.
Author's Response: Thanks. I tried for realism and things certainly don't get any easier as the story progresses. Hope you enjoy the rest. :) |
Pookah | 2009.08.23 - 03:28PM | 4: Sins of the Father | Signed |
a good dueling scene. I woud think it was hard to write it so well. This is an interesting tale and I am happy to see it is finished. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm happy to hear you're enjoying it. ~Ana |
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