Reviews for Of Debts and Debt Collection
| AmyLouise | 2007.09.28 - 06:42AM | 28: Secret Revealed | Signed |
| I'm sorry, but I agree with an earlier reviewer that Hermione is a right little bitch. I find her way too immature emotionally for a man of
Severus' intelligence, and I don't
feel very comfortable with most of
their scenes together - something just doesn't ring true.
And I don't believe Snape would
ever, ever propose in front of a
crowd - it's just way too far from
canon for me. |
| AmyLouise | 2007.09.27 - 09:15AM | 18: Room of Requirement | Anonymous |
| Deja vu for Severus to hear Draco saying almost the same words he himself had said to Dumbledore.
Interesting twist ... |
| AmyLouise | 2007.09.27 - 07:00AM | 16: Great Misunderstandings | Signed |
| It's so good to see something from Severus's point of view - abused, manipulated and used - yet he never went back on his word. I'm really enjoying this. |
| AmyLouise | 2007.09.27 - 03:15AM | 12: Truth and Renovation | Signed |
| Your fight scenes are excellent - I can see it all happening as I read.
Very real, and just how I would expect Snape to train Harry - no
quarter. |
| AmyLouise | 2007.09.27 - 02:10AM | 10: Off the Mark | Anonymous |
| That was very strong writing; I could feel the darkness. Horribly descriptive! |
| AmyLouise | 2007.09.27 - 12:37AM | 8: The Best I Can Do | Signed |
| I thought this is how it would be in Book 7 - Snape teaching Harry what he needed to know, because he was the only wizard powerful enough. But the end of HBP put paid to that theory. I like what you're doing better - more focus on Harry acquiring skill, instead of relying on blind luck. |
| AmyLouise | 2007.09.26 - 10:14AM | 3: Reunion | Signed |
| I'm not sure about putting Severus at the scene of the attack on the Potters - would that not mean that he very possibly would have known that Wormtail was the one who betrayed them? And for all his dislike of Sirius Black, he'd have also had to acknowledge that man's innocence. It doesn't feel quite right, if I may say so. |
| Tangerinefizzy | 2007.09.15 - 05:21PM | 41: Epilogue: The Accumulation of Small Acts | Signed |
| Stories like this make me wish fanfiction could be published. It was wonderful. I actually found myself fighting tears at times, and laughing out loud at others. Very, very good work. |
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