Reviews for Of Debts and Debt Collection
Aurora | 2008.06.02 - 01:19AM | 39: The Final Battle I | Signed |
I figured that cat would play a more important role than just Wormtail's nemesis.
So sorry about the lost Weasley. |
Aurora | 2008.06.02 - 12:53AM | 38: On the Eve of War | Signed |
I can hardly write for the tears brimming over in my eyes. That was sooooo beautiful. Shakespeare's sonnets have nothing on you for exquisite evocation of emotion. |
Aurora | 2008.06.02 - 12:37AM | 37: Of Debts and Promises Kept | Signed |
Norbert? All right!!!
Had a sneaking suspicion that Neville's dancing ability might come into play, but you had me convinced that Snape really wanted his herbology expertise. Led astray once more!! (and you do that so very well!) |
Aurora | 2008.06.01 - 11:58PM | 36: Neville's Gift | Signed |
Wow. You really had me believing that Snape actually was on Malfoy's side, aiding his escape. When he and Remus laughed together, I was thunderstruck. Seriously, I thought it was a genuine aboutface; after reading your work, I certainly wouldn't put it past you to desire to confuse your readers by having a last minute change-of-heart. |
Aurora | 2008.06.01 - 10:12PM | 31: Gathering Forces | Signed |
Do you think JKR would mind if you supplemented her books a bit (especially HBP & DH)? Your ideas are even better and more surprising than some of hers. You definitely write better battle scenes, but I totally love how Snape delegated the duties, especially to the Weasley family. "Where your (their) loyalites lie.." LOVE IT!!! |
Aurora | 2008.06.01 - 03:02AM | 28: Secret Revealed | Signed |
Didn't expect THAT!! I figured it was some kind of plan to help Harry or find and destroy Horcruxes, not making an engagment ring!! I never pictured Severus as crafting anything but potions, but of course, he wouldn't get an ordinary diamond ring; it would have to be something magical and absolutely unique in the world. Love how you included all the details about the material ffom which the ring was crafted, made it far more significant. You are such an amazingly creative writer!! Bravo!!! |
Aurora | 2008.05.30 - 01:04AM | 22: A Simple Gesture | Signed |
"Requesting the same mercy that the Longbottoms received?"
Didn't you mean "that the Longbottoms were denied"? They were driven mad by the Cruciatus curse, as you yourself mentioned later in this chapter, not killed by Avada Kedavra.
All that aside; absolutely AWESOME battles with Bellatrix!!! You are one heck of a battle writer!!! (Better than Jo even; hope that doesn't make me a traitor!!)
Author's Response: To be honest, I'd need to reread, but you're probably correct in regards to the wording. I wrote Debts well over two years ago and I'm afraid the readers know it better than I do these days. :)
Oh - I don't think it makes you a traitor. *grins* I thank you and hope you enjoy it. :)
Cheers, Ana |
Aurora | 2008.05.29 - 02:58AM | 12: Truth and Renovation | Signed |
Ah, yes, you DO write a good battle scene.
Author's Response: *smiles*
Thank you. :) |
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