Reviews for Of Debts and Debt Collection
| mroczna88 | 2009.05.25 - 08:39AM | 37: Of Debts and Promises Kept | Signed |
| I won't comment because there is so much lines that I love in this chapter :D like: "Go help Severus. I'm sure he's hopeIless" and "I'd say you've had an interesting twenty years" and so much xD Like Norbert come back and shame that J.K.Rowling didn't say a word about Hagrid after battle :/ |
| mroczna88 | 2009.05.25 - 07:48AM | 36: Neville's Gift | Signed |
| "Ron snorted, "I'd like to see that."" No, Ron, you wouldn't xD I love this talk about rain! And how girls react. Snape and Lupin are quite good team :P Really like this chapter |
| mroczna88 | 2009.05.25 - 07:24AM | 35: Darkness | Signed |
| Ufff... That was though. I don't know which is more mad- Snape or Lucius? With bare hands?O_O I know ot was just a bluff, but... He seems so EVIL, and I like it xD I'm horrible, am I? xD |
| mroczna88 | 2009.05.25 - 07:13AM | 34: Lucius' Choice | Signed |
| If Lucius will belive him I would admit that he's plainly stupid. Snape's theory is not something that brain can accept- too much "?". But nice, really nice. I can't wait to see how embarassed Snape will be when he'll dance :D |
| mroczna88 | 2009.05.24 - 08:24PM | 33: Close Your Eyes | Signed |
I like this intense... And how he reacts when she touches his hips (I don't know why this moment). Shame that you don't write about next "steps" >:)
One "but"- I don't think Snape would use word "love" this easy and so often
Author's Response: First, thank you so much for reviewing. I appreciate every one of them and I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed the trip. I wrote Debts in late 2005 and confess that the Snape here is likely not exactly the same I'd write now. What you're feeling is the fact that I watched far too much Pride and Prejudice and it bled through into the dark, sullen, yet secretly romantic Snape we have here. :)
~Cheers, Ana |
| mroczna88 | 2009.05.24 - 07:41PM | 32: Just the End | Signed |
| Hmm... I don't know why Draco didn't kill Lucius. I would do it, but maybe he was much more human. And I don't know why but I was expecting something like this (sorry for my English):
"Severus crossed the room and stand face to face with Hermione. His lips little curled up.
"I told you that I'll be back. Hysterical yet?"" xD
But your version was good :) |
| mroczna88 | 2009.05.24 - 07:09PM | 31: Gathering Forces | Signed |
| "Hermione reached under the table and placed her hand on Severus' knee. Immediately, he jumped up, ramming into the table and knocking a candle and pitcher over. Several disgruntled faces leaned forward, staring down the row as Severus tried to compose himself, cursing under his breath in a language Hermione was thankful she didn't understand."
xD xD xD I just die from laugh in this dinner moments! And when it comes to battle plans you're much grater than Rowling! Things that no one though- like dragons or testhrals... REALLY good! |
| mroczna88 | 2009.05.24 - 06:46PM | 30: Remembrance | Signed |
| Haha! Serves Ron right! >:) In every fanfic he's so stubborn and stupid! I like your Severus- but I think he should be more... I don't know what, buy something is missing.... |
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