Reviews for Tonight You're Mine Completely Part I
Miss Misery | 2005.09.04 - 06:44PM | 1: Hermione’s Atypical Day Begins | Signed |
Okay, I laughed so hard at this line: '"Are you Time Turning again?"' It's like saying, "Are you shooting up again?" It was amusing. Nice start!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I'm having fun with the story. I hope I can keep you laughing. Ch 2 may elicit a chuckle. And if I have the nerve to keep Ch 4 the way it is - there are a couple places that made me laugh. Now that you mention it - that line is funny. |
Keladry Lupin | 2005.09.04 - 10:45AM | 1: Hermione’s Atypical Day Begins | Signed |
Ooo, fascinating! I like it already; keep up the good work!
Author's Response: So glad to hear you like it, thank you for the encouragement. Hopefully I am taking Hermione and Severus around a twist or two that are different. |
LillaQ | 2005.09.04 - 06:35AM | 1: Hermione’s Atypical Day Begins | Signed |
A good start (not only for Hermione : -)) and I´m looking forward to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your comments. I was very fortunate that Jackie volunteered to beta read my story, she has been a tremendous help. I hope I can keep your interest. |
Sabrina | 2005.09.04 - 03:57AM | 1: Hermione’s Atypical Day Begins | Signed |
Great work so far. Please update soon..
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and taking the time to review. I hope I don't disappoint you. Ch.2 is uploaded and waiting. Ch 3 is completed and ready to go . Ch 4 is almost finished. |
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