Reviews for Tonight You're Mine Completely Part I
liese | 2005.09.18 - 05:24PM | 1: Hermione’s Atypical Day Begins | Anonymous |
when will you finish your story? I am enjoying it.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I'm very pleased that you are enjoying it. It has been a lot of fun for me too. I have the story outlined, but I tend to be a perfectionist and I probably nit pick too much. It seems to take me forever before I am satisfied with the wording. I hope to complete a chapter every other week. After chapter four, the pace will pick up a bit and move faster. I needed to get the character's backgrounds filled-in. |
poochiepoo | 2005.09.18 - 04:08PM | 3: Detention With Snape | Signed |
love it...cannot wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I hope I don't disappoint you. Chapter four should be ready in a few days. |
Knockturn | 2005.09.18 - 01:33PM | 3: Detention With Snape | Signed |
Very much looking forward to updates--I'm interested to see where this goes. So far it's well done, and I like the interactions. They're believable.
Author's Response: I appreciate that you spent time giving me a review, thank you. I wasn’t certain of the reaction I would get when I took Severus back to his student days, which is almost entirely the subject of chapter four.
Chapter four hasn’t been beta read yet, which makes it impossible to determine when it will be uploaded. I’m still toying with it a tad, trying to decide if I should subdue it to make it a ‘B’ rating.
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Marianne | 2005.09.18 - 11:06AM | 3: Detention With Snape | Signed |
I was really mesmerised by this chapter, thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you for your encouraging words. I enjoyed writing this chapter; it sets the tone for the storyline.
The next chapter explores the early relationship between Severus and Lily, and explains how Severus - Hogwarts student, began to turn into Snape, spiteful Potions Master.
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hunnybunch | 2005.09.07 - 09:48AM | 2: Potions Later That Morning | Signed |
poor kiddo. i hope her detention won't be too bad. nice start. when is your next chapter out?
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I will upload Ch3 when I return home next week. Ch 4 won't be far behind! |
DayLightDancer | 2005.09.06 - 07:27PM | 2: Potions Later That Morning | Signed |
OUCH, that hurts... XD
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I try to draw from life experiences - girls, silly creatures that we are can be - do some stupid things without thinking. How else would I learn not to put in wriitng what I didn't want anyone to read? |
merrclm | 2005.09.06 - 07:26PM | 2: Potions Later That Morning | Signed |
Very interesting. He could have read the rest to himself. Darn, now how are we suppose to know what she wrote about her favorite professor. =) Cindy
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I'm sorry, but you will see in the next chapter what she wrote - some of it. Right now Severus has the letter, but Hermione will get it back. I always say 'never put anything in writing unless you don't care who reads it', I guess Hermione didn't take my advice. |
winter_fresh | 2005.09.06 - 05:57PM | 2: Potions Later That Morning | Signed |
Wow! That's a good start. Please write more soon
Author's Response: Thank you for your words of encouragement. I have Ch 3 ready to update as soon as I return home next week. Hermione has a better day than Severus does. |
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