Reviews for Tonight You're Mine Completely Part I
FlameOfTheNorth | 2006.08.06 - 02:21AM | 8: Hermione’s Revenge | Signed |
I do hope the next chapter will be up soon!
Cheers,
FlameOfTheNorth
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, Flame. Chapters 9 and 10 are back from their seconds reads by my beta. As soon as I can get them formatted they will be uploaded in the queue. Chapter 11 is back after its first read. I hope to tie-up 5th year with Chapter 12. joannie |
chrissyseebs | 2006.06.03 - 02:15PM | 7: Night Hits The Morning Sun Part Two | Signed |
and just when it gets interesting, too...there it ends! Good story.
Author's Response: Sorry chrissy just realized I should have responded to each one. No it is not the end. Unfortunately I have to work (I like to eat and have a roof over my head), I have much of it done. But I'm waiting until I have several chapter to upload so there will not be so much time between updates. |
chrissyseebs | 2006.06.03 - 02:00PM | 6: Night Hits The Morning Sun Part One | Signed |
good explanation, strange how you rewrite history though.
Author's Response: Thank you chrissy, yes totally AU - and if what I hear is true about 7 - I may not even read it. joannie |
chrissyseebs | 2006.06.03 - 12:47PM | 5: Dreams And Nightmares | Signed |
way too much talking during sex...
Author's Response: Maybe. But I have my reasons. joannie |
chrissyseebs | 2006.06.03 - 12:26PM | 4: Reverie And Dreams | Signed |
I don't want to see his sad memories!
Author's Response: I'm sorry chrissy, but I wanted you to know what hardened him to life. joannie |
chrissyseebs | 2006.06.03 - 12:17PM | 3: Detention With Snape | Signed |
huh? to the end
Author's Response: This was a short one - my beta split it. joannie |
chrissyseebs | 2006.06.03 - 10:38AM | 2: Potions Later That Morning | Signed |
well that was some potions class
Author's Response: Thank you chrissy, Hermione will bet better with Accio - she just needed a little practice. The professor will eventually come to realize that it is a good thing that she can hear his thoughts - sometimes. joannie |
chrissyseebs | 2006.06.03 - 10:32AM | 1: Hermione’s Atypical Day Begins | Signed |
quite an interesting start here.
Author's Response: Hi chrissy,
Thank you for the review. Though the story hasn’t been updated for awhile, it is finished on paper at least. I have to get it on the computer and to my beta, who does two reads on it. And, I intend to finish it before posting any more chapters. The biggest reason being there are things that build on each other from chapter to chapter, and if I leave something out that I need later on, I can’t go back and add it.
Storyline will be AU, and after HBP I’m hesitant to do Dumbledore in. He’s a great character, and the only father-like figure Severus has known.
Poor Severus, his misery has just started. Taking 50 points from Hermione was his undoing.
Too much talking – maybe, my attempt to show Lily as the stronger of the two. And to show cause for her devotion to him (yes, I know, she married James, but it happened suddenly and quickly – hmmm). Will Severus never learn, after Lily he commits himself to You-Know-Who, then to Dumbledore, then in HBP the Unbreakable Vow with Narcissa – will he ever be free to be his own person? He will only be free once Voldemort is no longer a threat and Lily has released him. The Dumbledore-Narcissa thing – I can’t decide which way to go. This is the reason that the thought of Hermione trying to control him is driving him to distraction.
I hope it was enjoyable.
joannie
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