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Reviews for Winter Heart

droxy2004.08.07 - 11:57AM7: The ExperimentAnonymous
great romantic tension in the lab

ancientgirl2004.08.07 - 11:32AM7: The ExperimentAnonymous
Oh dear. I think Severus just hit a bump in the road. She's thinking love and he's thinking, well he doesn't seem to be sure I guess. He seems to just want her for sex but there are certain things he does and says that betray his original plan. Then of course you have that damn Sirius sticking his nose in things. I hope things don't get too bad, I expect a certain amount of angst but I hate for it to be the basis of a story. This is romance dammit and I want my romance. Okay I'll stop with the temper tantrum. Great chapter, give us more soon please.

Dryad2004.08.07 - 11:01AM7: The ExperimentAnonymous
ooohhh sexy snape and a promise of all she desires? even ith her feelings, that has to be SERIOUSLY hard to turn away from...good job!

Maela2004.08.07 - 08:20AM7: The ExperimentAnonymous
ugh! stupid, stupid snape! :P update soon!

bookwmnjan2004.08.07 - 08:11AM7: The ExperimentAnonymous
He blew it. I have a feeling he's about to find out what is feels like to lose something that you didn't know you needed.

snapette822004.08.05 - 05:27PM6: DinnertimeSigned
Sirius had better keep his nose out of this! Like the course of true love will be that smooth. Loving all the snow shennanigans and I can't wait for an update.

Kyra Invictus Black2004.08.02 - 12:31AM6: DinnertimeAnonymous
That wasn't advice, that was Sirius being a prat. Although he was right about "all kinds of fun in the snow." I'm very glad Severus is having second thoughts about the temporary nature of his plans for Hermione. Perhaps it would be helpful if he were to realize that dumping Hermione like that would be very similar to what his fiancee did to him, in order to help him make up his mind about keeping her, or at least accepting her friendship afterward (in his plans, I mean. It doesn't seem like he's thinking Forever yet. Though I'd love to see Sirius's face when they announce their engagement.) One more nitpick. You mentioned Sev's former fiancee in a paragraph which was otherwise in Hermione's point of view. I don't remember reading about her finding out about that yet, although I might have missed it. Could you clarify? Thanks much for the beautiful story. --Kyra Invictus.

Sabrina2004.08.01 - 11:47PM6: DinnertimeSigned
I love the new chapter. Please update soon.

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