Reviews for Winter Heart
verasuspense | 2012.01.23 - 09:45PM | 6: Dinnertime | Signed |
Hermione is likely to attract a lot of attention if she dresses for dinner as if its a party. |
severus49 | 2011.02.04 - 02:04PM | 11: Confrontation | Signed |
There's only one little criticism I have with this chapter: Hermione calls him "Professor Snape" in their intimate situation. -Not sex, mind you but they are talking about romance and that makes it intimate- I really don't see how she could be that professional with him during that conversation that she would still use his honorific. I think even though he's not given her leave to call him Severus, all vestiges of formality went out the door the minute he kissed her. After all they aren't in class, or around others who don't know of their intimacy, and they're not around other people of authority.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :) That's a good point. |
adelgado | 2010.06.16 - 10:04PM | 37: Epilogue | Signed |
Loved it Love It. LOVE IT!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for that. :D |
SnaMione | 2009.12.23 - 11:59AM | 37: Epilogue | Signed |
Wow what a read, and yes few babies when first born tend to look around, a few weeks ago i had my daughter Arisa Mae and her little green eyes were all over, i thought it was good that the only part of the birth was Snape pacing and then the cry it was sweet and i liked it a lot. Thanx for making me smile at a happy ending. X
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind review. :) |
Andromz | 2009.02.05 - 11:54PM | 37: Epilogue | Signed |
*speechless* ... perfect. In every way. *HUG* You're totally my idol.
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind review. :) |
n1987 | 2008.09.16 - 06:30PM | 37: Epilogue | Signed |
you got a nicer story than me then! my dear sister delights in telling me that instead of tapping me once (to see if the baby can cry or something?) they passed me around the room and everyone had a go
loved this fic!
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind review. :) |
apinchofhope | 2008.08.23 - 08:25PM | 20: Questions | Signed |
ok I really like this story so far but... sir snake? are you serious? lol. "no worries pomfrey, this crazy snake will take me to dumbledore!" "ok hermione, go on then!"
sorry.. it just cracked me up. still love the story though.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :) |
somebodyoranother | 2008.07.10 - 12:34AM | 16: In the Library | Signed |
Ha ha, TARDIS library!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :) |
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