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| septentrion | 2007.12.21 - 05:48AM | 7: Run for the Shadows | Signed |
| So, you jump from 1997 to 2001? What happened during that time, besides Lucius's going out of prison? Where is Severus? Is Hermione with Ron? I like your story, but a four-year gap, in which so many things important to the story might have happened, is a bit much. Well, I feel frustrated. Author's Response: I was afraid of just such a reaction! Thanks for your honest criticism. The fic won't be wholly in chronological time, however, so hopefully your questions will be answered in the chapters to come. | |||
| Black Aliss | 2007.10.01 - 06:22PM | 6: Never Let Me Down | Signed |
| Just when you thought there are no new stories and are fated to have to reread everything(not bad..not bad..) A bright story that is absolutely right in both dialog and characters come along. I am your devoted reader (possibly forever..) Thank you for a great CONTINUING read! applause! So just to say..obviously I LOVE your story. | |||
| Leraiv Snape | 2007.07.25 - 01:05PM | 6: Never Let Me Down | Signed |
| Good fic. I like the Sinistra twist - she's an underused character and I'm looking forward to seeing how you develop her relationship with Malfoy. Being a fan of Snape/ Hermione, I of course hope you get them together, but I would also be interested to see a fic where Hermione simply has to put her crush behind her because, frankly, in canon, it would simply never happen. Good job - hope there's an update soon! | |||
| Rosmerta | 2007.07.24 - 02:32AM | 6: Never Let Me Down | Signed |
| Good chapter. I like it that Hermione is being honest with Snape and isn't intimidated by him - much! | |||
| rosin | 2007.07.23 - 12:16AM | 6: Never Let Me Down | Signed |
| I somehow missed your update of chapter 5 so I got to read two wonderful chapters at once. I loved Snape’s retrieval of the locket last chapter and Hermione’s outburst this chapter. I’ve always wondered what would happen if Hermione ever had serious meltdown in canon in front of Draco, or preferably Snape, and confronted them about the belief system widely held in Slytherin (something more than the slap in PoA). Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, I've wanted to see the same thing happen- thus the scene. ;-) Grieving over book seven... ::sigh:: | |||
| ladyjulian | 2007.07.11 - 05:34AM | 5: Changes | Signed |
| Hmmmm, I wonder why you want to restructure this? I think it's fine and compelling as it is - but there are a few minor inconsistencies in this chapter - is she blushing or isn't she, for example. Some typos too. But MAN, this Snape is knicker-twisting and horrid and lonely and suave all at once. I could nearly feel his ring. :shudder: Do please continue! Author's Response: Thanks! Evil typos... a few always manage to escape my notice. | |||
| ladyjulian | 2007.07.11 - 05:26AM | 4: Golden Years | Signed |
| This story deserves WAY more readers. I continue to be intrigued, and you never gallop too far ahead of your characters. Lucius's 'shantung' tones are rawther off-putting. And nice reference to "Peter Pan" in there! | |||
| snarkypants | 2007.07.10 - 08:03PM | 5: Changes | Signed |
| Very nice chapter. I especially like how ambiguous your Snape is. The line when he takes the locket, and she knows it's a means to an end, rather than a seduction, no matter how she might wish it otherwise... very nice. Author's Response: Many thanks. I'm trying hard to keep his motivations unclear, so I'm glad that's coming through. | |||
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