Reviews for Sweet Mercy
| Jophiel | 2006.09.11 - 09:46PM | 5: IV | Signed |
| Snape makes shampoo! And the results were hilarious! =) LOL |
| Jophiel | 2006.09.11 - 09:45PM | 4: III | Signed |
| LOVED how this chapter ended! =) |
| Jophiel | 2006.09.11 - 09:43PM | 3: II | Signed |
| Hmm...I wonder where Harry went. And a mysterious stranger in a cave? Interesting! I liked the part where Snape carried Hermione after she fell out of bed -- gentleness and tender concern hidden under gruffness. |
| Jophiel | 2006.09.11 - 09:42PM | 2: I | Signed |
| Sweet indeed of Snape to tend to Hermione, and even give up his grandfather's watch to obtain the ingredient to cure her. Interesting Dark spell also, I thought. |
| casey | 2006.08.25 - 02:23PM | 10: IX | Signed |
| Rats! Hermione and Severus just can't seem to catch a break and, by extension, neither do your readers. (oh so close but no lemons, yet; they've finally made the decision so it should just be a matter of time.) At least Hermione finally got the answer to her question about Harry but I'm not too certain I believe he's still in Jamaica. Our protagonists are now quite clear about the depth of the Evil on the mountain. Don't wait too long to tell us how they'll fight it and whether anyone will believe them and help. ~casey |
| Amortentia | 2006.08.22 - 07:15PM | 10: IX | Signed |
| Please update soon. What a dreadful recurring nightmare! |
| Amortentia | 2006.08.22 - 06:33PM | 5: IV | Signed |
| Peter and Wendy...hmmm. ould it be another literary reference? And who is Hook? |
| Amortentia | 2006.08.22 - 06:20PM | 4: III | Signed |
Battling trolls when crossing bridges? Is that a reference to the Three Billy Goats Gruff?
This is a fine story. I am enjoying your mixture of suspence, mystery, romance and the interaction of my favorite twosome. I'm so glad there are several posted chapters!
May your Muse sing and your time be your own.
Author's Response: Very good spot! It is Three Billy Goats Gruff. Thanks for reading! :-) |
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