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| jmc | 2007.04.02 - 10:59AM | 11: X | Anonymous |
| 11-08-2006 14:46 Rated 10
Good job. Can't wait for an update! | |||
| greenwood | 2007.04.02 - 10:59AM | 11: X | Anonymous |
| 11-08-2006 05:23 Rated 10
Very dramatic ending for this chapter and this phase of thier relationship. What will be interesting to find out is how this new vaccuum created by the exit of our scorned hero will be filled (in the short term). I am so glad to see an update to this story. I love these adventure/mystery/romance/angst types. Great job! | |||
| Silverbutterfly | 2007.04.02 - 10:58AM | 11: X | Anonymous |
| 11-07-2006 20:35 Rated 10
I've read this chapter a while ago and i couldn't help but wonder how ... wrong this fight was. What were they thinking? Fighting over nothing at all? You must get them back together before Severus goes back to that mountain... Wonderful story, and you write fantastically. Love, Silverbutterfly | |||
| siriusluv | 2007.04.02 - 10:56AM | 11: X | Anonymous |
| 11-07-2006 18:45 Well honestly, I found that to be a little odd. I don't think Hermione could really act quite so stupidly. | |||
| jenonymous | 2007.04.02 - 10:39AM | 7: VI | Anonymous |
| 11-08-2006 03:23 "She started to say something else, but the butt of a shotgun poking through the doorway to the kitchen cut her off." Does that mean he had the muzzle pointing at his own head? | |||
| Jophiel | 2006.09.11 - 09:54PM | 10: IX | Signed |
| I loved this chapter, especially the part where Snape tended to Hermione's new injuries. Although finding out what happened to Emily was a bit scary. Also, it was realistic to have the crumbs in the bed argument. =) After all, eating a sandwich in bed would surely result in crumbs...hehe. And finally we find out what happened to Harry. The scene near the end was quite intriguing, as is the continuing mystery. Looking forward to reading more, but will wait patiently for the next installment to your story. =) | |||
| Jophiel | 2006.09.11 - 09:50PM | 7: VI | Signed |
| I laughed when Hermione finally noticed Snape's new hair color, and the conversation-argument afterwards. =) I also liked this part a lot. It illustrates their different approaches to the task: “We could be taking a radio survey. We want to know what stations they listen to and when.”... “That would mean standing there and listening to their answers,” he said wryly. The point was to figure out if the man was there or not, not determine if he preferred classical music to pop... “The census?” she offered. He shook his head... “You must be a horrible Auror,” he remarked, pushing open the front gate and going in. There was no need for any farce. If someone did answer the door, they just asked if Danielsen was there. If he was, great. They would Obliviate him and go home. If not, they would ask why, Obliviate whoever answered, and go home. | |||
| Jophiel | 2006.09.11 - 09:48PM | 6: V | Signed |
| These lines made me laugh a lot. =) "Do you know who you are?" Best to check to see if he had a concussion from the fall. "God." Hermione frowned, remembering the way he strode through the halls of Hogwarts. "You would say that, you miserable git." "I was trying to say God my head hurts, but you interrupted me, you irritating harpy," he snapped. | |||
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