Reviews for Sweet Mercy
Tatianna | 2006.05.06 - 05:30PM | 8: VII | Signed |
There is so much UST going on here.... I think something's going to explode! I love the interaction Severus and Hermione share. It's also nice to see them working together, but both in character with the personality traits we've come to expect from the both of them. Can't wait for the next installment! |
Aurealis | 2006.05.05 - 12:53AM | 8: VII | Signed |
Sweet! Keep going, these longer chapters are really well balanced between budding romance and excitement of the investigation. I'd like you to go more in depth about Snape's feelings on his killing Dumbledore. I like the introduction you gave to his reasoning. Well done. |
droxy | 2006.05.04 - 09:34PM | 8: VII | Signed |
Evil cliffy. Wonder how he is going to accomplish what he wants in the last paragraph. ;) |
Anouska Draconius | 2006.05.04 - 05:01PM | 8: VII | Signed |
I've just discovered this story and read it all in one go. I love a good mystery and this is certainly shaping up to be just that. I'm really enjoying the way Severus and Hermione are interacting, but for some reason I can't help thinking it might be some sort of evil Harry on the mountainside. |
Maggie | 2006.05.04 - 02:41PM | 8: VII | Signed |
Excellent!!!!!!!! |
casey | 2006.05.04 - 04:20AM | 8: VII | Signed |
I really like the interplay between them particularly Snape's unpredictability. I have to wonder about Snape deciding to seduce her; seduction is manipulation after all (overlooking how many of us would like to be seduced - lol); using the spy's powers of observation he might discover it's not necessary.
You've really piqued my curiosity over the mystery person on the mountain and his servant. You were really updating with nice regularity in the beginning but then this chapter took a long time. I'd be tickled to get regular updates 2-3 times a month. ~casey
Author's Response: I don't think it will be hard, but stlll necessary. Both of them are more inclined to pull away than initiate anything so really it's a conscious decision on his part to not pull away. Seduction isn't the best word for it, but it makes Snape feel better. :) Thanks for reading! |
Keladry Lupin | 2006.05.04 - 02:19AM | 8: VII | Signed |
Woo-ha. Lovely UST, Vanity! You have me worried -- I don't normally enjoy mysteries, but I can't help but be drawn in. |
blackaces924 | 2006.05.04 - 12:46AM | 8: VII | Signed |
oh no! more people this time... and a little girl too!
Great chapter, vanityfair =) You did a great job with Hermione finding step by step regarding the details to Dumbledore's death.
Can't wait till Snape actually goes into his plan for seducing Hermione *grins* |
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