Reviews for Sweet Mercy
greenwood | 2007.04.23 - 11:53PM | 13: XII | Signed |
Wonderful chapter! You left us with a great cliff hanger. This Abby is not a "friend"....makes you wonder who she is working for... I can't wait to read the next update. |
oriannajones | 2007.04.21 - 08:00PM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
this is a great story, keep it up! |
Titania | 2007.04.21 - 04:45PM | 13: XII | Signed |
Lots of wonderful action, great sexual tension and a lovely cliffhanger for both charaters! I can't wait for more! Live long and prosper, Titania. |
Sporky | 2007.04.02 - 11:11AM | 12: XI | Anonymous |
03-19-2007 20:09
Sigh. I love this story.
One teeny nitpick. When Severus comes back from the pub, he takes off his robe before getting into the bed with Hermione. But then, after he says, "Not yet," and kisses her again, you have Hermione clutching his robes while they're kissing. Then she notices that he's not wearing robes, just his boxers.
This is a wonderful story, and I don't mean to belittle. Keep up the good work!
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deathbyshikon | 2007.04.02 - 11:10AM | 12: XI | Anonymous |
03-14-2007 15:51
Very interesting story! I love the bunny slippers. Do they have a vicious streak a mile wide? They seem to already be sporting the big pointy teeth...
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Akoya8 | 2007.04.02 - 11:08AM | 12: XI | Anonymous |
02-25-2007 01:47 Rated 10
This story is AMAZING! I followed it on FF.net but you haven't updated lately, so, please, update soon and make me the happiest person in the world! :)
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Riposto | 2007.04.02 - 11:07AM | 12: XI | Anonymous |
01-13-2007 16:56 Rated 10
I just discovered this story, and have truly enjoyed it. Especially like your portrayal of Snape - he's very human in this story, and a very typical male. All the persistent maneuvering for a shag, and his motives for helping Hermione as often inspired by his libido as any other reason is really very funny, but also very realistic. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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nocturnus | 2007.04.02 - 11:06AM | 12: XI | Anonymous |
01-09-2007 11:00 Rated 10
I'm glad that they are in good terms!. Are you sure is voldemorts return? somehow I thin you are tricking us!
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