Reviews for Sweet Mercy
| Maggie | 2006.02.15 - 09:45AM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| Hmmm... |
| jmac | 2006.02.15 - 08:35AM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| Woo hoo. Sounds exciting
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| Aragon | 2006.02.15 - 08:21AM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| Interesting start! Looking forward to more.
But: if she was to capture "the last remaining Death Eater" why was she surprised by his identity?! *wonders* If there's only ONE single person in the equation how can Hermione have expected anyone else? Makes no sense to me....
And MLE must be really thin-stretched (or did they want to get rid of Ms. Granger? ^_~) to send just one lonely Auror to capture a DE in an open, wild territory he's familiar with.
Not sure about this: "someone spooning soup to her" - shouldn't it be "into her"? |
| June W | 2006.02.15 - 08:20AM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| Very nice start. Did she know the name of the last remaining Death Eater she was looking for? They didn't send other Aurors with her - her best friends Harry and Ron didn't volunteer? Severus could've Obliviated her but didn't, so I'm assuming they'll have a nice friendly chat in the next chapter. Hope you post again soon! |
| sizzle21 | 2006.02.15 - 08:16AM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| Hmmmm. Well this certainly is interesting so far. I look forward to the next chapter to see what happens between Hermione and Snape! |
| kcjenna | 2006.02.15 - 08:14AM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| interesting start |
| snapette82 | 2006.02.15 - 08:00AM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| Good start. But one Auror to take on the presumably most notorious Death Eater still evading capture? I do love it though! |
| Cassio | 2006.02.15 - 07:37AM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| What an evil cliffhanger! I hope you update soon, because you got me effectively hooked! ~~Cassio~~ |
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