Home | Members | Help | Submission Rules | Log In |
Recently Added | Categories | Titles | Completed Fics | Random Fic | Search | Top Fictions

Reviews for A Taste Of Silence

Pixie Dust2017.10.08 - 03:52PM8: EpilogueSigned
Wow this was awesome! I was sure the "secret" was she was trying to protect his spy status from being announced. Thank you for sharing your work :)

Phyllidia2014.03.24 - 02:52PM8: EpilogueSigned
Enjoyed the story. Thanks for sharing.

Phyllidia2014.03.24 - 02:37PM6: Heal The GirlSigned
Duh, she didn't need to bite her tongue off for that--we already knew it! ;)

Phyllidia2014.03.24 - 02:01PM2: ReactionsSigned
I sometimes wonder if the lack of reviews on this site has to do with having to go back to the top to review. Anyway, enjoying the story. Thanks for sharing!

Phyllidia2014.03.24 - 01:48PM1: PrologueSigned
A little squicky (which my spell checker believes should be 'Bisquick') but interesting!

Ceilidh022013.05.21 - 10:56PM4: Dark SpellSigned
I know it's a late review, but you do realize Zabini's a boy, right?

Gemagination2012.07.10 - 09:42PM1: PrologueSigned
Ha! So fucking rad. I love that she bit her tongue off, it's totally badass. I'd expect that from a Jason Bourne-type, not Hermione!! But it makes sense... love it.

Jong_Kahn2012.06.15 - 11:04AM3: Wandless MagicSigned
Excuse me: how could Hermione eat, without having a tongue? She'd choke! Think about it: without being able to push the food around in her mouth to get more properly chewed, she couldn't get the mass of food properly masticated. Plus, the tongue helps 'move it down the line' to be swallowed. At the very least, it would be incredibly messy! Not to mention the embarrassment of opening her mouth, literally facing everyone in the hall (many of them curiously trying to see her). I'm not trying to hurt or offend you here, merely observing I don't think you totally thought the reality of this--even in a fantasy world--through all the way. It's still a good story!

[Previous] 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 [Next]


Disclaimers
Terms of Use
Credits

Ashwinder
A Severus Snape/Hermione Granger archive in the Harry Potter universe

Copyright 2003-2007 Sycophant Hex
All rights reserved