Reviews for A Taste Of Silence
| Estrilda | 2003.12.31 - 04:54AM | 5: Putting Words In Your Head | Anonymous |
| Truly an amazing story with a great deal of depth. More, more, more, please? |
| Potions Mistresss | 2003.12.31 - 12:32AM | 4: Dark Spell | Signed |
| I'm really glad you updated! I love this story.... but I do wish we had just a little insight on what the answer to the question is.... I hope to see another installment soon! Oh and by the way, I'm glad you expanded on Auror Borealis's idea for the story! |
| Patatita | 2003.12.30 - 03:29PM | 4: Dark Spell | Anonymous |
| Just love it... my dear Hermione. Needs some time, huh? |
| Estrilda | 2003.12.30 - 11:19AM | 4: Dark Spell | Anonymous |
| I am so glad you're updating so often. Thank you. I am sure hooked. Didn't Severus feel anything when she hugged Sirius? Please say he's at least beginning to feel possessive of her. |
| Volin_Devinaux | 2003.12.29 - 07:52AM | 3: Wandless Magic | Anonymous |
| Great job! I have really enjoyed what I have read thus far. Please update soon. |
| Potions Mistresss | 2003.12.29 - 07:48AM | 3: Wandless Magic | Signed |
| I love the conflict in this story. It's wonderful the way you made them interact together... I really hope you update soon! I will be waiting! |
| Estrilda | 2003.12.29 - 05:40AM | 3: Wandless Magic | Anonymous |
| oh my - the sparks are starting - thank you, thank you. I love it when there is actually a plot that explains how these two characters discover how much they have in common. Yours goes way beyond the call - it's wonderful. Did I miss how she tells the fat lady to open or is that coming later? Please update soon. |
| Estrilda | 2003.12.29 - 05:34AM | 1: Prologue | Anonymous |
| I am very new to this site and don’t think that I have ever read your fiction before. I want you to know that I loved your story especially the relationship that is building between your main characters. It is just that the whole story flows wonderfully except for these two sentences in the prologue that just creak a little like a bit of chalk catching on the edge of the blackboard during riveting presentation. He accepted to brew a potion.
Would you accept to volunteer? My background is in editing and teaching technical writing. I have very few if any creative cells for original writing, but I can usually cite the exact violation of grammar when something catches my ear. These grammatical constructions don’t seem to violate any rules, they just seem a bit “off.” I think it is because the acceptance was of a request or offer that dropped out of the sentence. Perhaps, it would flow better if he accepted my offer to allow him to brew (or my request that he assist me by brewing) the potion and if he asked if she would accept the challenge (or the responsibility) of volunteering. Anyway, ignore me if this doesn’t seem right to you and please, please continue sharing this terrific story.
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