Reviews for Severus’ Betrayal
Azulkan2 | 2005.04.07 - 11:53PM | 1: One | Signed |
That was a bit of a heart wrencher. Very well written. |
BaYer04rulz | 2005.04.07 - 09:30PM | 1: One | Signed |
Ohhh, angsty! Nice one, too! Thanks for writing. |
zyra123 | 2005.04.07 - 02:45AM | 1: One | Signed |
OMG..... that was really an angsty fic if I saw one!!! **gasp** But it's still good though.... write more, won't you? |
magicalwonder | 2005.04.06 - 11:25PM | 1: One | Signed |
Wow. I can honestly say that I have never read a story in which Snape has taken such a drastic step at making sure that if he can't have Hermione no one will. I have never seen reality depicted in a story quite so well. Good first job and I certainly hope that you continue. I would love to see a romance written from a mans point of view. |
Nyxx | 2005.01.26 - 04:37AM | 1: One | Signed |
Wow... I don't really know how to respond to this. I always get teary when they die, but oddly enough I am, well, just shocked. You did something with this plot that was most unexpected. That is the beauty of imagination. You came up with something original and powerful. |
Horserider | 2004.12.19 - 08:54PM | 1: One | Signed |
Very nice! My only complaint would be that I would like to see it go longer and be fleshed out in more detail, ie. from a more third person tense...this was a bit more like one person relaying the latest news to someone else...but it was a good plot, especially for a first go-round. Keep going and gift us with some more from your quill! :) I like that Severus actually sought revenge for her betrayal, something that I think he would really do, and that you cast him as a Dark Wizard which, though he may ultimately be one of the *good guys*, I think darkness will ever be a part of him and I think that should be portrayed more often in the fanfic. I see Snape as being jealous, possessive and territorial, and I highly doubt he would willingly hand over his woman just because another man could do better by her. I don't think Voldemort picks his Death Eaters just because they're willing to make a pledge; it would have to go deeper than that, as does the Mark. Good characterization! ~HR |
postionmistress60 | 2004.12.06 - 11:11AM | 1: One | Anonymous |
Short and intense. I like it Marcell! It's a nice little change from the hormonally induced fics I usually read. ;) I hope you consider writing more. Let us know via "the Group" when you do. Btw...wasn't Potter's black dog hanging from the tree outside his residence? (smirk)
Deb |
Lana Manckir | 2004.12.05 - 10:07PM | 1: One | Anonymous |
I love it Marcell! Very dark indeed and poor Sev, I could almost feel his pain. You've done a great job and I hope to read more of your work. |
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