Reviews for Alone No More
| joannie | 2006.02.14 - 08:30PM | 1: Vanishing Emptiness | Signed |
| It's a great start. The idea of working together on a cure for Draco's situation (directly resutling from Hermioine?) is intriguing - and the change in Hermione is refreshing. She seems to have aged more than her years. As for the grammatical - my only suggestion is to check the forum for a beta reader. Hope you update soon. Thanks. joannie |
| sefa | 2006.01.17 - 11:59PM | 1: Vanishing Emptiness | Anonymous |
| At first I thought it was a one shot, but I'm glad, as I kept reading, that you plan to continue with it. It has alot of potential and I'd like to keep reading. :) |
| joannie | 2005.09.05 - 09:23AM | 1: Vanishing Emptiness | Anonymous |
| I like the beginning and the descriptive background you painted of how Snape sees himself. Snape reaching out to someone in need - interesting. I hope you will update soon. |
| lydia | 2005.06.14 - 08:24PM | 1: Vanishing Emptiness | Anonymous |
| this is very good. please continue. i would really like to see what way this is going to go. she gave harry his happiness, lets see if he will actually let her get hers. please up date soon. |
| Angel2525 | 2005.06.14 - 02:54PM | 1: Vanishing Emptiness | Signed |
| more please |
| Keladry Lupin | 2005.05.27 - 02:19AM | 1: Vanishing Emptiness | Signed |
| Glad to see that this isn't a one-shot. Very promising beginning, and the emotions are well-portrayed. |
| Titania | 2004.12.01 - 10:58PM | 1: Vanishing Emptiness | Signed |
| ohhhh, I like this! The sense of a sort of history between the pair, the realness of them both. I am looking forward to the rest!
Live long and prosper, Titania |
| susandara | 2004.12.01 - 07:27AM | 1: Vanishing Emptiness | Anonymous |
| Please don't wait too long to post the next chapter. I love the tension and the new side of Hermione that you are developing. |
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