Reviews for Heart With No Companion
My Cats Mom | 2004.11.06 - 02:40AM | 14: Hermione | Anonymous |
Another great addition. My personal theory (prompted entirely by the aura thing) is that she's co-opted Snape's mind, somehow wired still behind her own eyes. Fun regardless of the reason. |
GeekGoddess | 2004.11.06 - 01:50AM | 14: Hermione | Anonymous |
For a minute there I got the feeling that Hermione's soul had merged with Snapes. Oh well...wonderful chapter. |
Madamme Cerise | 2004.11.06 - 01:09AM | 14: Hermione | Anonymous |
Oh, I am totally loving this story. Please update soon. |
droxy | 2004.11.05 - 11:20PM | 14: Hermione | Anonymous |
read all 14 chapters today. The part where Hermione wanted to die was very angsty and I would say you impart to the reader her feeling of loneliness.
Snape the tease without knowing it, and Hermione the tease trying to get him to kiss her was very romantic.
Love the kissing scenes, very high in romantic tension.
The parts witht eh gossiping teachers is quite funny and also plausible. Like the doddering Dumbldore, and Harry the prat. |
Lynn | 2004.11.05 - 11:06PM | 14: Hermione | Anonymous |
Please! Please tell me this story isn't going to end up like Orpheus ad Eurydice, please tell that wasn't foreshadowing, I don't think I'd be able to stand if it ends up like that! Oh I'm in tears now, he can't lose her, he just CAN'T! |
June | 2004.11.05 - 11:01PM | 14: Hermione | Anonymous |
What a nice use for Sibyll - and she's not even making a prophecy. At least Minerva seems a bit more believing of Severus now. Can you think of ANY more cheery songs??? |
a nonny mouse | 2004.11.05 - 10:53PM | 14: Hermione | Anonymous |
I just read the fic from ch 1 straight through to 13. Spent 2-9 in tears, with audible sobs from time to time. Actually made my stomach cramp with nausea. Somehow, that's a good thing. Fantastic choices of songs to open one's wrists by--and yet, I'm getting the whole happy-ending vibe. Now, if only Potter would stop being such a prat! Fantastic story--you have an innate gift for angst! |
Unicorn Lady | 2004.11.05 - 10:48PM | 14: Hermione | Anonymous |
It all makes sense now! She's trapped all right.... in Seceru's mind! Cool twist! Can't wait to see what happens next! |
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