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Reviews for Time Will Follow

Jong_Kahn2018.07.23 - 12:16AM13: Unmade PlansSigned
I'm very glad Hermione put her name down for that gown. The way you wrote it, it's just got to be used for her wedding! Good chapter--thanks for writing!

Author's Response: You might be right...

loreen772018.07.16 - 08:20PM14: A Secret KeptSigned
Poor Granger parents. It has to be so overwhelming for them. I am glad Severus is interested in a full ceremony for their wedding.

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loreen772018.07.06 - 10:30AM13: Unmade PlansSigned
Awww. A shopping trip with your mother. Some of my favorite days have been spent this way. Too cute they ended up in a bridal boutique. This chapter made me smile. Thanks!

Author's Response: Sometimes you just need a fluffy little break

bubbles282018.05.06 - 02:29AM12: Farewell to BillySigned
Overall I like it, fairly straightforward, although I feel like we were building up to Billy being a potential threat and that didn't happen. I also kind of felt like their emotional reveal happened pretty quickly, and this Snape isn't very angsty, or conflicted. I suppose because his memories are gone?They seemed so ready to fall in love. I'm not sure I'm prepared to believe it given how quickly it happened, but on the other hand sometimes it can just happen swiftly and easily. Hermione too, she was career oriented but I guess slightly at loose ends/a loss in her life, and she seems fairly content with living out an alternative life...I guess because she gets two runs at the same three years? She's not technically missing out, just having an alternative adventure.

Author's Response: Thanks, I appreciate your thoughts!

loreen772018.03.14 - 05:01AM12: Farewell to BillySigned
For me the death of the spiders ends up feeling cruel. Unless the potion has serious life saving properties, it feels wrong for so many spiders to be sacrificed for so little venom. What potion will it be used in?. But potions throughout the canon books often felt similarly cruel. So many creatures seemed to be sacrificed for basic potions. You were true to canon and it was an exciting chapter. It is not your fault that this is one area of the books that never sat well with me.

Author's Response: Thanks for your reviews!

loreen772018.03.11 - 10:43AM12: Farewell to BillySigned
For me the death of the spiders ends up feeling cruel. Unless the potion has serious life saving properties, it feels wrong for so many spiders to be sacrificed for so little venom. What potion will it be used in?. But potions throughout the canon books often felt similarly cruel. So many creatures seemed to be sacrificed for basic potions. You were true to canon and it was an exciting chapter. It is not your fault that this is one area of the books that never sat well with me.

Author's Response: Yes, there is much casual cruelty built into canon HP

mt_nestor2018.02.08 - 01:24PM11: A PromiseSigned
I agree with the other reviews - Ron’s intention was not echoed by Hermione, therefore no magical wash over them. Hope that Ron doesn’t cause too much trouble for our pair once Hermione catches up with herself.

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loreen772018.02.07 - 05:39AM11: A PromiseSigned
Magic recognized their statements of intention to each other. That’s lovely. .

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