Reviews for Time Will Follow
emcnary | 2018.01.10 - 07:04AM | 7: Saving Severus Snape | Signed |
Yay--an update! Good chap, I'm curious to see how this develops.
Author's Response: Thanks - working on proofing the next one now ;-) |
Jong_Kahn | 2018.01.07 - 03:29PM | 5: Back in the Thick of Things | Signed |
A tough, tense chapter. You have portrayed the tension between them very well. I look forward to the next!
Author's Response: Thanks - things will be happening very quickly soon! |
emcnary | 2018.01.07 - 12:05AM | 6: Threading the Loop | Signed |
Gah!!! I came back the same day to read the other chapters because I couldn't wait--now I can't wait for the next chap!!!
I love how you use the theory of the time loop like in PoA, it makes a great deal of sense. And Severus' little slip calling her "Hermione" just before she left was a wonderful foreshadowing of their coming relationship. I love everything about this so far: the build up of her time travel, her feelings about her relationship with Ron, the tortured existence of Severus that final year...all great. I'm excited to see how this all plays out.
Author's Response: Thanks! The next one will be up soon! |
emcnary | 2018.01.06 - 06:42PM | 4: Following Time | Signed |
This is so good!!!! I want to binge-read this, but i have my own projects to work on--I'll be back for sure! I can't wait to see how this turns out.
Author's Response: I'm glad you find my story addictive! :-D |
loreen77 | 2018.01.04 - 10:48PM | 6: Threading the Loop | Signed |
I wondered if she would have to stay and wait for time to play out. The way he slipped up with her name when he talked with her in the future made me suspect. Great chapter. I really liked how the dialogue flowed.
Author's Response: Yes, they will become a bit more comfortable with one another.... ;-) |
Pixie Dust | 2018.01.01 - 09:37AM | 5: Back in the Thick of Things | Signed |
I'm so glad that they haven't automatically fell in love/lust just because they are sharing living quarters!
Author's Response: It will take these two a while ;-) |
loreen77 | 2017.12.31 - 01:12AM | 5: Back in the Thick of Things | Signed |
Months of tension living in his apartment, that would be stressful.
Author's Response: Indeed! |
loreen77 | 2017.12.25 - 09:01AM | 4: Following Time | Signed |
My, oh my. I loved this chapter so much. It is such a great twist on a time turner story. So creative and unique.
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you will continue to enjoy it! |
[Previous] 1 2 3 4 5 6 [Next]
|