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Reviews for Abject Humiliation

moozer2022.01.10 - 03:57PM2: This Too, Shall PassSigned
I know it's been years but I really enjoyed the start of this and I am hoping you will continue this someday. One can only hope...

Dziude2010.12.14 - 09:55PM2: This Too, Shall PassSigned
This is great, i'm really enjoying reading it. Please don't keep us too long waiting to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Okay, I honestly didn't think this was that great when I posted it... but now I'm thinking I'm going to finish it. I think I'll start work on this again this weekend.

nene722010.08.25 - 12:59PM2: This Too, Shall PassSigned
Awesome start!! You've got me well and truly hooked already. Eagerly awaiting your next update.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

pathseeker2010.07.05 - 06:50AM2: This Too, Shall PassSigned
Oh, this is GREAT! You truly have a way with words! Please finish this story; you have left us at a terrible cliffhanger...

Author's Response: I will give it another stab then. Thank you!

Loyd19572010.02.03 - 10:18AM2: This Too, Shall PassSigned
i seemed to have missed this story and have absolutely fallen in love with it. What a wonderful way with words you have and how they flow effortlessly. I was so wrapped up in the story and then realized it was at the second chapter. I so love a distraught, lonely Snape who believes he is not worthy of love.

Author's Response: Thank you! :) Working on chapter three. I'm behind schedule thanks to a fall a couple months ago, but I'm okay now.

Linneh2009.12.16 - 05:27PM2: This Too, Shall PassSigned
Voldy's ending was a bit....unexpected and I felt like it didn't totally belonged in the story. I did laughed out loud though xD It's funny., I really enjoy your depiction of their 'relationship' Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: You are absolutely right, I could have left it be. I suppose I could insert a rather lame deus ex machina excuse about needing to be rid of Voldemort and Dumbledore, but I think my favourite explanation is that Tolin held me at gunpoint. ;) All kidding aside, I do appreciate the criticism. I am working to improve my writing, and hopefully next chapter will be up soon.

beaweasley22009.12.16 - 12:54PM2: This Too, Shall PassSigned
Well that bit about Tolin McBümstik totally negated the whole Harry Potter 'the one with the power to defeate the Drak Lord' thing.

Author's Response: Hooray for AU, lol.

Persevero2009.12.16 - 10:27AM2: This Too, Shall PassSigned
Presumably if Riddle had been shot *before* all the Horcruxes has been disposed of, he would simply have returned. But afterwards, I agree - why did no one simply shoot the blighter? He should at least have been afraid of that possibility - he spent his early years in the Muggle world in the heyday of Westerns, after all!

Author's Response: Haha, yeah I agree. Back before book six was published, I wondered why none of the Muggle born witches or wizards at least thought of the possibility. However, I think Hermione in the first book sums up the explanation best when she says that most wizards lack logic. Oh well.

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