Reviews for Breathing Love
| sandpiper | 2021.02.24 - 01:20PM | 8: Chapter 8: Returning | Signed |
| Thank you! It was a very nice story. The end came a bit too fast though. The beginning was thought through and realistic, then Snape accepted her a bit too fast, and the way Hermione used his words to force him to return before he was ready, was very ic, but also felt rather invasive. But his agreement came too fast. To expect him to change his life just because she wants it and spent one night with him, seems a bit over the top. He just saved her life, the least she could do is give him some time, not to press him.
But otherwise very nice. |
| sandpiper | 2021.02.24 - 01:06PM | 6: Chapter 6: Fritz's Blood Thinner | Signed |
| Oh, so she want him to share all his secrets with her, but she is lying to him about her own? He trusts her to keep his existence quiet, but she doesn't trust him?
But at least the boys didn't actually believe her that he is alive.
Snape trusted her a bit too easily, but otherwise it's going well :) |
| sandpiper | 2021.02.24 - 12:58PM | 5: Chapter 5: Teacher's Pet | Signed |
| Yep, that's the problem with unsolicited help. I guess it is one of the stages of growing up, to learn that if you try to push help on someone, it might not do that person any good, the second lesson is not to behave insulted about it. Not everyone learns them though. |
| sandpiper | 2021.02.24 - 12:52PM | 4: Chapter 4: An Inquisition | Signed |
| I understand why she didn't tell him that Harry and Ron already know that he's alive. It was dishonest, but she couldn't bear him leaving. But what amazes me is a complete lack of regret about it. It might not be a direct lie, but it's still quite a big lie, specially after he told her so much and so easily.
Interesting about the curse too. I wonder if she is planning to ask for his help. |
| sandpiper | 2021.02.24 - 12:29PM | 3: Chapter 3: John | Signed |
| They are both very in character. Hermione is charging ahead trying to help as she sees fit and doesn't even for a second consider that other people might not want this type of help or to be talked about, Snape is angry and guarded. Harry and Ron are fairly ic too.
The whole beginning is very well written and quite enjoyable, which isn't always the same thing. Thank you! |
| Ive | 2019.10.20 - 02:02PM | 8: Chapter 8: Returning | Signed |
| Thank you for sharing this story of redemption! The illness story and the exile story both work well. It feels like the relational build up is a bit quick to me, but just my preference. |
| kudlatek | 2017.01.30 - 02:03PM | 8: Chapter 8: Returning | Signed |
| Fantastic! Thanks for the fic :) |
| SpaceInvader | 2016.08.25 - 12:39AM | 8: Chapter 8: Returning | Signed |
| Beautiful story. Thank you for this. I loved your Snape! |
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