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| Rhettsmom | 2007.06.11 - 12:27PM | 1: Passenger Compartment | Signed |
| oh wow! I need a cold shower now. Please write more- it's brilliant! Author's Response: Don't bother with the cold shower, read more fanfiction!! :) Thank you for the response. I'm glad that you enjoyed my fic. :) | |||
| Koryn | 2007.06.10 - 09:10PM | 1: Passenger Compartment | Signed |
| Loved it! Thanks for writing this. Will there be more, by any chance? Author's Response: There might be more! I have written more but it hasn't been proofread and I would like to give it a rework before I post anything here again. Hopefully soon! | |||
| Myene | 2007.06.10 - 08:53PM | 1: Passenger Compartment | Signed |
| woah...just hot :) Author's Response: Hehe, that's what I love to hear! Thank you for your input. :) | |||
| Crescentmoon | 2007.06.10 - 02:39PM | 1: Passenger Compartment | Signed |
| That was hot. Great work! Author's Response: Thank you very much. :) | |||
| Nadrek | 2007.06.09 - 09:39AM | 1: Passenger Compartment | Signed |
| Interesting, and well written.
This is one of the very small subset of stories where the characters have unforced sex so quickly, and yet it's within the bounds of belif.
Severus clearly isn't concerned at all about rules, or laws, or propriety - while we don't see whether he had any feelings for Hermione proper beyond lust in general (we don't know if it's for her, or for attractive, aroused women in general), we do see that he's quite willing to take advantage of opportunities.
He left very quickly, but the gentleness of the words at the end allow for followup meetings without great angst.
He also left her his cloak and a ripped open shirt, and I'd be curious whether she freshens the air and collects the buttons, cleans herself up, and/or both.
The one major point that is iffy is that we have one of the following:
A) He doesn't care if the tryst is discovered (or wants it to be) ("Yes, Albus, she offered, and I took her. As she's happy with it, and I'm still spying for you, you can't do anything about it if you want to keep talking about love as the most powerful magic... and if you want to see Riddle defeated." "Yes, Lord, I'm taking advantage of her, and forcing Dumbledore to suck it up, and Dumbledore hates that, but still trusts me to spy for him, isn't it delicious?")
B) He is, at most, the only one in the castle that uses Legilimency regularly - and trusts Hermione will successfully keep it secret
C) He trusts Hermione will successfully keep it secret even from others using Legilimency
A is the most interesting from a future perspective, C is quite interesting from a backstory/what has Hermione been up to and why perspective, and B leaves things more open. Given that Hermione is a lousy liar, I believe, A seems most likely.
Thank you - please continue, if you like. Author's Response: Nadrek, I appreciate everything you have said. It's wonderful to elicit feedback, but yours is the type I crave - the type that makes me think more about my motivations. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Hopefully, if I post more, you'll like it as well! | |||
| Akisis | 2007.06.08 - 06:41PM | 1: Passenger Compartment | Signed |
| Holy crap, that was well written! I wish there were more of an ending, though, or even if you could develop the story more (*more chapters, cough cough!*), it would be AMAZING. Author's Response: Well I have written more but there's still not much of an ending, hehe. Perhaps one day there might be but I can't possibly imagine how I could end it! | |||
| froggy | 2007.06.08 - 05:56PM | 1: Passenger Compartment | Signed |
| Wahey! That was simply hot. Hot hot hot. Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you! :) | |||
| Jodie_Dove | 2007.06.08 - 05:12PM | 1: Passenger Compartment | Signed |
| Completely agree with other reviewers! more! More!! MORE!!! :-) Author's Response: There might be more one day! ;) | |||
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