Home | Members | Help | Submission Rules | Log In |
Recently Added | Categories | Titles | Completed Fics | Random Fic | Search | Top Fictions

Reviews for Passenger Compartment

barbied0112007.07.22 - 09:01PM1: Passenger CompartmentSigned
That was hot. Great story.

Author's Response: Thank you, I really appreciate it! :)

isisthewolf2007.07.16 - 06:01PM1: Passenger CompartmentSigned
all i have to say is WOW that was amazing writing right there i loved it

Author's Response: All I have to say is, you're very kind. Thank you so much for your lovely response!

Megan Consoer2007.07.09 - 04:49PM1: Passenger CompartmentSigned
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Author's Response: Hi Megan, Thanks for leaving me a message. Would love to hear more from you, though! I have received your other "reviews", by the way. ;) I have written more, for your information, but it's not ready to be read yet, I think!

Periss2007.07.08 - 10:19AM1: Passenger CompartmentAnonymous
Well that was great! And unlike others I think it doesn't need a sequel! I have often come across stories which are of very good quality for the first two or three chapters but then go down hill as they are forced to continue.

Author's Response: Thanks for your input, Periss. I really appreciate it. I'm being cautious - I have written more to this "story" of sorts but it all can be read separately without having read the first "chapter", I suppose it is! I'm not going to force it to continue but if the inspiration strikes I might write more!

SataiDelenn2007.07.03 - 10:31PM1: Passenger CompartmentSigned
Lol. I love this story. Hot though it was, I found amusement at the following:

As she came, Snape grabbed her by the hips and thrust into her once, twice, thrice

It reminds me of the Golden Girls' episode where Dorothy and Rose are trying to write a song for a contest and Rose comes up with the line:

"Miami is nice, so I'll say it thrice..."
& Dorothy says, "Thrice? Who the hell says "thrice"?"
& Rose replies, "Well, it's a word!"
& Dorothy says, "So is interuteran, but you don't hear people using it in a sentence!"

Gods, lol, it's been YEARS since I last saw that episode, too, lol. Anyway, that line you used with "thrice" had me cracking up because it really is, not a word used in everyday, casual conversation, lol. But I liked it. It shows you were really thinking, and not trying to use the same old cliches, lol.

Good job!

Author's Response: How interesting! Thank you for sharing that with me, I thought it was really amusing. :) To be quite honest, I love the word thrice and I use it quite often! Probably why I stuck it into the fic, hehe! I love any type of reaction so I'm glad that you got a laugh out of it. :D

snapeluvsme2007.06.26 - 03:25AM1: Passenger CompartmentSigned
OUTSTANDING!!!! that was hot. It was pretty close to believable too. i look forword to reading more of your work.

Author's Response: Thank you! I love getting capslocked responses, hehe. I strive to make things as believeable as they can be (no one like heaving bosoms when they're totally fake, after all!). Hopefully I'll have more for you soon. :)

moriablue2007.06.17 - 04:46PM1: Passenger CompartmentSigned
I loved the story. Great job - I do have to agree with the others that I hope there are future chapters or another story by you that includes Snape and Hermonie.

Author's Response: Thank you, morablue. I appreciate the kidn words. I've been slowly but surely working on some writing which I hope to have posted soon. :)

deb121812007.06.13 - 02:08PM1: Passenger CompartmentSigned
would love to see more perhaps at hogwarts hmmmmmm nice and naughty good mix

Author's Response: I love nice and naughty too. It's a delicate balance, though! Hopefully I'm on the right side of it. :) Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate the feedback.

[Previous] 1 2 3 4 5 6 [Next]


Disclaimers
Terms of Use
Credits

Ashwinder
A Severus Snape/Hermione Granger archive in the Harry Potter universe

Copyright © 2003-2019 Sycophant Hex
All rights reserved