Reviews for The Very Air
SnapesFavoriteMistress | 2005.12.19 - 06:14PM | 1: The Very Air | Signed |
Beautiful. The constant repetition of "she is" gives it a wonderful, melancholy feel. Well done. |
Taura | 2005.12.19 - 05:35PM | 1: The Very Air | Signed |
Oh...that was perfection. My heart ached for poor Severus. I adore it. A new favorite. I love your work. |
Fictionlover_32 | 2005.12.19 - 05:06PM | 1: The Very Air | Signed |
Beautiful. Exquisite. Heart-warming.....there's no words to describe it. You have a way with words Miss Catherine. Absolutely wonderful! |
Horserider | 2005.12.19 - 04:07PM | 1: The Very Air | Signed |
Very good...coupla typoes that need tweaking, but I enjoyed it thoroughly. Love Snape's POV. ~HR
Author's Response: Heh, yeah, un-beta-d and pretty much typed on a spur of the moment thing. I'm surprised it's not illegible xD Glad you liked it!
-Catherine. |
Lyndie578 | 2005.12.19 - 03:59PM | 1: The Very Air | Signed |
Poignant and sad and very believable. Currently, it the only true possibility. Thank you for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. My pleasure :)
-Catherine |
Envinyatar | 2005.12.19 - 02:44PM | 1: The Very Air | Signed |
Once again something brilliant from you! How good it is to see you back, I cannot cease mentioning that. I liked the structure of this one, the repeated "she is". It creates such a pensive atmosphere... Melancholic, even, hopeless yet with a remaining spark of hope - which could be kindled into a raging fire, in my imagination at least. The possibilities this leaves! It would be interesting to explore them, though I like this very much the way it is. I'm very much looking forward to an update of Walking With Shadows (and the updates on your other WIPs, once you've finished that one). ~Jules
Author's Response: Thank you very much :) This was written with not much thought put into it, so I'm delighted you got so much out of it.
-Catherine |
[Previous] 1 2 [Next]
|