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Reviews for The Very Air

SnapesFavoriteMistress2005.12.19 - 06:14PM1: The Very AirSigned
Beautiful. The constant repetition of "she is" gives it a wonderful, melancholy feel. Well done.

Taura2005.12.19 - 05:35PM1: The Very AirSigned
Oh...that was perfection. My heart ached for poor Severus. I adore it. A new favorite. I love your work.

Fictionlover_322005.12.19 - 05:06PM1: The Very AirSigned
Beautiful. Exquisite. Heart-warming.....there's no words to describe it. You have a way with words Miss Catherine. Absolutely wonderful!

Horserider2005.12.19 - 04:07PM1: The Very AirSigned
Very good...coupla typoes that need tweaking, but I enjoyed it thoroughly. Love Snape's POV. ~HR

Author's Response: Heh, yeah, un-beta-d and pretty much typed on a spur of the moment thing. I'm surprised it's not illegible xD Glad you liked it! -Catherine.

Lyndie5782005.12.19 - 03:59PM1: The Very AirSigned
Poignant and sad and very believable. Currently, it the only true possibility. Thank you for sharing.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. My pleasure :) -Catherine

Envinyatar2005.12.19 - 02:44PM1: The Very AirSigned
Once again something brilliant from you! How good it is to see you back, I cannot cease mentioning that. I liked the structure of this one, the repeated "she is". It creates such a pensive atmosphere... Melancholic, even, hopeless yet with a remaining spark of hope - which could be kindled into a raging fire, in my imagination at least. The possibilities this leaves! It would be interesting to explore them, though I like this very much the way it is. I'm very much looking forward to an update of Walking With Shadows (and the updates on your other WIPs, once you've finished that one). ~Jules

Author's Response: Thank you very much :) This was written with not much thought put into it, so I'm delighted you got so much out of it. -Catherine

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