|Deb >^..^< SS_HG4Ever@yahoo.com||2004.03.23 - 11:17PM||1: ||Anonymous |
|What a way to take a break from a rough day!!! You did a very nice job here!!! Deb >^..^< |
|cassie||2004.02.22 - 01:46PM||1: ||Anonymous |
|Love it, love it, love it. Did I mention that I love it? Because I love it.
Wow someone´s silly today.
No honestly, a really great story. Please more. |
|Svenja||2004.01.29 - 05:14PM||1: ||Anonymous |
|Really great story, like Cam! Sev, Harry and Ron are in character, as well as everyone else! Ron could have been a bit angry, but as Albus said, he matured! Love it!, I'll continue reading tomorow!|
|Fictionlover||2003.12.17 - 05:09PM||1: ||Anonymous |
|Oh, darn. I left a review but I left it under my real name(Shin Hee Tae). I'm just letting you know that if's the same person. Just finished reading on the first day of Christmas! Nice ending. And thanks again for posting on this webiste. Bye!|
|Sara Lady Dalian||2003.12.02 - 10:27PM||1: ||Signed |
|I would like to say that I understand that you are very young. The story you are writing is one that has been done several times before - in several incarnations. To bring it to it's full fruition, I would suggest that you work in some new quirk that is unique to your story.
Please do not think of this a flame. I want to see anyone who wishes to write, do so well. I wonder, though, if you are not perhaps trying to write too far above your experience and maturity level.|
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