Reviews for The Apprentice
| sandpiper | 2021.03.17 - 06:19PM | 6: Cathartic | Signed |
| That was lovely, thank you.
Dumbledore was unnecessary, I think, it doesn't add anything to the story except for the unpleasant feeling of being violated. Severus reacted a bit to lightly to her running after their first kiss, after being unreasonably angry in the beginning to boot. But otherwise lovely. |
| aakmlee | 2020.12.01 - 09:41PM | 6: Cathartic | Signed |
| Nice, sweet story |
| Jong_Kahn | 2016.02.26 - 03:36AM | 6: Cathartic | Signed |
| Very, very nice! A new favorite. (Hands you another "10", smiles shyly.) |
| Jong_Kahn | 2016.02.26 - 03:21AM | 4: Surprise | Signed |
| This chapter made me realize it's been entirely too long since I've made some chocolate cookies. I found a good-looking recipe online for Chocolate Oblivion Cookies (on Food 52), and they look like just the ticket. I shall make them in the next couple days, but in the meantime will finish this delightful story! |
| PotionsGal14 | 2015.06.03 - 08:48AM | 6: Cathartic | Signed |
| No secret that you had writers block. |
| Laure_lei | 2014.05.02 - 01:20PM | 4: Surprise | Signed |
| Love the story, and love Tim Curry!!!!! |
| carrigan | 2011.08.20 - 07:28PM | 6: Cathartic | Signed |
| Love It. Love it love it love LOVE IT! Not exactly constructive but I'm to busy doing the Hermione happy dance to complete a half way sensible sentence. |
| Jenniemay | 2011.06.24 - 12:08PM | 6: Cathartic | Signed |
| Wish there was more. But good. Very good |
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