Reviews for Biting off more than you can chew
Kittens | 2021.09.04 - 11:25AM | 1: The first bite | Signed |
Bravo! Nicely done. |
Jong_Kahn | 2015.02.14 - 04:11PM | 1: The first bite | Signed |
Wow. You're one of my favorite authors, yet I can't believe I didn't read this one before. Thank goodness for "Random". Short, but well written; your Severus is understatedly lovely. Happy Valentine's Day!: Here's a "10"! |
Jensteed | 2014.07.22 - 12:17PM | 1: The first bite | Signed |
Severus was brilliant in this, so careful and proud of her but in such a simple and understated way. It was beautifully written, I adored it <3 |
roon0 | 2012.03.31 - 05:54AM | 1: The first bite | Signed |
Excellent. Poor Hermione but I did have to laugh at the end. Great stuff. |
Logbrandur | 2011.06.06 - 12:05PM | 1: The first bite | Signed |
This fic is really well written. It's intense and shows just the right amount of insight to what happened to Hermione. Severus praise in the end is just the icing on the cake. |
loreen77 | 2010.09.27 - 06:31AM | 1: The first bite | Signed |
disturbing but well written. Not the most settling to read before breakfast........definitely no fry-ups for me today. |
AMessOfADream | 2010.08.30 - 10:07PM | 1: The first bite | Signed |
wow.... that was amazing, I love the emotion in this it feels so real. and i absolutely love how Severus comforts her and helps in the kitchen and Severus tucking her hair back and giving her praise at the end it felt true to the character yet extreamly tender at the same time.I LOVE Severus in this fic. |
Bella Bagley | 2010.05.20 - 05:28AM | 1: The first bite | Signed |
LOVE this. That last bit, just that simple action of Sev stroking back her hair and finally giving her praise, was perfect. |
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