Reviews for A Marriage of Convenience
| chinalatina28 | 2020.10.08 - 10:34PM | 4: Fulfilling the Agreement | Signed |
| That is the 2nd worst deflowering experience I've ever read. I swear he need a kick to his fucking smirking mouth. I'm so stressed out after reading that. Calling her a howler? When he shoved his fuck in dry? He needs to lose some teeth, violently |
| Dimplz | 2014.09.25 - 12:56AM | 15: Epilogue | Signed |
| It was an enjoyable read even if it was a bit cliched. |
| StormDragonfly | 2014.03.31 - 03:29PM | 7: Announcements in the Great Hall | Signed |
| On the concrit side, having another chapter open with focus on an unknown letter Hermione's already read was not only repetitive, but dulls the narration of the story. I'd recommend not repeating devices unless there's a parallel created with a point that's clearly established.
On a reader side, where is this story going? We're getting next to nothing from Snape in this story, and the premise is too centered on him for his role to be ignored.
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| marisamarinee | 2014.01.17 - 08:21PM | 12: Detention in the trophy room | Signed |
| She should tell him soon |
| marisamarinee | 2014.01.17 - 08:08PM | 11: Potions and Predicaments | Signed |
| Finally! Haha |
| marisamarinee | 2014.01.17 - 07:39PM | 10: Gryffindor Tower | Signed |
| Really not liking this Hermione |
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