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Reviews for A Choice of Roads

2005.02.17 - 11:25PM

21: Defending a Heart

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(big huge sappy SIGH.......ahhhh)...

Please have no lack of confidence in your skills as a writer, nor in what you have created here. You have brought to life a lovely, perfectly-balanced HP world in which two very in-character folk fall gently in love, and several very in-character immature self-centered bozos act like the "bohunks" they are (it's a Southern term for "that" kind of man). And the love scenes, with the promise of things to come when Hermione visits Severus' home....gee it's getting awfully hot in here for February, even in the South! Now where did my hubby go? (grin)

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!

PlaidPooka	2005.02.17 - 10:26PM	21: Defending a Heart	Signed
I only just discovered this story today, and read the whole thing through. I am absolutely enchanted with it! It reminds me of that joke: How do porcupines make love? Very carefully! Of course, your tale is far more sweet than that pitiful little joke. You have a lovely touch with how people think/feel when in Animagus form. It was big fun to read, and I am anxious for more! :)

Winna	2005.02.17 - 08:31PM	21: Defending a Heart	Signed
Yay for big updates! Hermione reacted much better than I would have, but then she's usually the reasonable one. Harry sounded like the OotP Harry; I think he would have reacted poorly to Hermione seeing anyone, although of course her seeing Snape makes it worse. It sounds like Remus is coming to grips, so maybe he can get Harry & Ron straightened out. I'm glad to hear that you will continue this story. I'm really enjoying the way it's going, even though we all know the eventual ending thanks to Hermione's salve experience.

totallylost	2005.02.17 - 08:07PM	21: Defending a Heart	Signed
i always know when i read a great story. iam always want to know what is next yet very happy that i have read what i did. this is the 2nd time i have read this story but the 1st was a was back i was happy the find it again with to read more. please keep writing thank you

droxy	2005.02.17 - 07:36PM	21: Defending a Heart	Signed
See why we talk about this fic on WIKTT chat?? :> Look at the reviews you get! It occurred to me that if HG's friends continue to fight her on this, it will drive her into SS arms even more, for one reason is that she's stubborn and bossy. Perhaps, Lupin will wise up to that fact. Nice long chapter, and no OOC ness. Don't pull out your hair, there is no need to do that.

Betz	2005.02.17 - 05:28PM	21: Defending a Heart	Signed
GRRRRR! Pardon me, but do you have a spare 2x4 I could borrow, so I can wallop Harry upside his head before beating him senseless with it? That dictatorial, overbearing berk! He can shove that broom of his up his arse, and go fly to the moon and back. Your Harry is more infuriateing the Screechy!Harry from OotP. Get over yourself, Harry. And Remus. Let Severus have a little happiness in his life, your prat! It was sweet how Severus kept on trying to control himself with Hermione. Those international hands just itching to travel. (Roman hands and Russian fingers?) Your UST is too much. Now I need a cold shower, or I won't last another six hours till my husband gets home. Aniously awaiting the next chapter.

lovethelab	2005.02.17 - 05:14PM	21: Defending a Heart	Signed
I am glad I looked at this site today to see your update. I missed this story somehow - I read it all toady and I wanted to let you know how much I have enjoyed it! I hope that you are able to update again soon.

justme	2005.02.17 - 05:10PM	21: Defending a Heart	Signed
I have been glued to my computer since chapter one~! Glad to see you've followed up on this lovely story. I'm also glad that Hermione and Snape's romance is finally heating up!

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