Reviews for Weekend With The Professor
Mrs Alfred | 2005.03.27 - 05:48PM | 7: Tangled in the Dungeons | Signed |
Lovely :-) |
ShagsTheDustmop | 2005.03.27 - 08:30AM | 2: Does It Really Matter Where? | Signed |
I find myself highly distracted by the constant point-of-view shifting. You should really only have one point of view per section, either Hermione's or Snape's, rather than going back and forth on a sentence by sentence or paragraph by paragraph basis.
It's a common writing error that you may want to consider in your next work. |
Anna York | 2005.03.26 - 10:22PM | 1: A Routine Hogsmeade Weekend? | Signed |
That was a fun read. Everyone could use a weekend like that. |
PhoebeADA | 2005.03.26 - 09:13PM | 7: Tangled in the Dungeons | Signed |
I really enjoyed that. Did you think about writing a sequel to this? That would be brilliant.... |
Sonni | 2005.03.25 - 05:15AM | 7: Tangled in the Dungeons | Signed |
Well written and a feast for the imagination. |
English Snow Rose | 2005.03.24 - 12:50AM | 4: Taking It Up a Notch | Signed |
I just want to say before I move on to the next chapter... That because of this chapter title... I will Never be able to watch Emeril Live the same away again. Every time I hear 'another notch' I am going to this about the Professor and his 'Student'! |
VelvetButterfly | 2005.03.23 - 11:15AM | 7: Tangled in the Dungeons | Signed |
I'm really enjoying this story! |
ozarkmoon | 2005.03.21 - 10:53PM | 7: Tangled in the Dungeons | Signed |
Great story. Blame it on the Fire Whiskey every time. Ha! |
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