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angelicallydemonic2006.06.23 - 12:38PM1: Dressed In Black AgainSigned
I love poetry, and writing poetry...and as such I always follow one rule explicitly when reading poetry. I enshrine myself in my sheets and in complete silence and I read the poem out loud. Oftentimes, the feeling of the poem wraps around me and this one was no exception. It was quite ironic that I was wrapped around satin sheets at the time, and this poem (as I read it allowed) reduced me to a shivering heap of sweaty flesh in the end. I agree, there is nothing explicit about it, but the subtlety works like a blade of pleasure, reaching into the dark recesses of the mind and coaxing an erotic response. I would love to read your original work.

Author's Response: *hands you wet-naps and towelling cloths to help you clean up after your, er, sweaty moment...snerk* Sowwy, couldn't resist teasing ya. Yes, there is something about this one that can only be experienced by reading it aloud! And I do have original work--as in a real, published novel, squee--coming out in February of next year. Go to http://groups.yahoo.com/group/MoITWF to find out more, if you want... ~Lotm

Danielle2006.02.19 - 07:53PM1: Dressed In Black AgainAnonymous
This is an amazing piece of work. The images you plant are just perfect, I can see why you find it R rated. Thanks for sharing... you really have a talent with moulding words.

Author's Response: Thanks, Danielle! Even though it's been 15 years since I wrote the original version, this one still makes my blood race... ~Lotm

wisteriarose2005.03.30 - 07:55AM1: Dressed In Black AgainSigned
*Heart Racing* I agree that perhaps this should be rated "R." I love your alliteration and repetition. "With Black pupils/ In passion-dark eyes,/ Holding the Black of the Night/," I would love to stare into such deep wells. An overall good image and sensual feeling.

Author's Response: Thank you; this one has stayed with me for quite some time. There's just something so sensual about reading it aloud...and yet, for all the feelings it engenders are 'R' rated, it's really quite mild in its content... ~Lotm

MlleGigi2005.03.13 - 06:40PM1: Dressed In Black AgainSigned
Mmmmmmmm...very nice, as always! I can understand very well what you said in your Author's Note about the erotic quality of this poem despite the fact that there's nothing (or very little) which could be called explicit. Then again, it's my experience that quite often a subtle approach is far more effective than a blatant one -- which is probably one of the reasons why so many of us are here instead of on a site which caters more to Harry/Ginny, Harry/Hermione, or Ron/Hermione fics.

Author's Response: "The subtle art and exact science that is potions making..." (lust-puddle!) Blatant sex (pornographic writing) gets booooring after a while. It's the subtle build-up, the teasing and tormenting, the anticipation that lifts the reader (or even the lover) higher and higher, until the peak they crest is so pleasurable, it's painful at the same time, yet still feels so goooood...*ahem* Anyway... Thanks, and thank you for letting me know you enjoyed it! ~Lotm

justme2005.02.05 - 09:45PM1: Dressed In Black AgainSigned
Loved it!!! I also love the comment regarding Ya-WHo-Must-Not-Be-Named *ROFLMAO*

Author's Response: Shh! Only truly great and powerful technogeeks dare mention the name of Ya-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named out loud without cringing... ~Lotm

queenp2005.02.05 - 04:21PM1: Dressed In Black AgainSigned
excellent work, LOTM. Very good writing. I enjoyed it.

darkbutterfly2005.02.04 - 10:49PM1: Dressed In Black AgainSigned
All the alliteration is making me feel like I'm sliding around on those silken sheets myself! I'm so glad you're posting here Lotm, because I've been following your stories on the restricted section and thought it was such a pity that they weren't here on my favourite page...but now they are...woot! Looking forward to more stories from you!

Author's Response: Have you tried reciting it aloud? (leer) (heh heh, just kidding) I'll post something new as soon as at least one of the plot-pirhannas currently nibbling me to death is finished... ~Lotm

JustJeanette2005.02.04 - 07:01AM1: Dressed In Black AgainAnonymous
Long or short your talent shines. Jeanette

Author's Response: Thanks, luv. ~Lotm

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