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happilyjaded2005.08.04 - 12:56AM6: The MeetingSigned
I most assuradly enjoyed having Hermione come, bookbag in tow, questions ready. Only she could quiz a gigolo. But this is just a quick comment as I make my way to the end of this most satisfying tale. Elizabeth

Author's Response: LOL!! I thought she might have a few "questions" to ask. It's been so long since I've gone through this story. I suddenly feel up to it! Thanks.

HogwartsBaybee2005.08.01 - 09:11PM17: EpilogueSigned
Wow. It took me a few days to complete this story and I was not disappointed (entirely). Reading the summary, the idea of Severus as a gigolo seemed a bit too fantastic to work in an intelligent story. But I was hooked in from the first chapter where a smug Snape decided on his new past time. The thing with your story is- the plot is highly developed but the characters were not. Your dialogue was incredibly choppy at (most) times, and you don't portray Severus in quite the way I think he needs to be portrayed. When he refers to Hermione as "love" non-stop, I find that highly unrealistic. Severus Snape is the type of man in which sweet nothings and pet names mean nothing to him. "Hermione" is intimate enough for the pair. He was very out of character in some other chunks too. But I'll take the story for what it was. You made the idea of a Snape prostitution work, while having Hermione and Snape fall in love. The epilogue was sweet if not overly fluffy. (Oh, and Ron becoming a gigolo afterwards was dryly appopriate- I liked that!) And what happened to Draco and Ginny and their baby? o_O Good job, all in all. Just work on your Snape a little.

Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you enjoyed it for the most part. As I was answering a challenge, I threw the canon type snape out the window and had a romantic snape. It was never my intention to try to make him dark.

However, if that truly is the Snape that you like, please read over a couple of my other stories, "Where Your Loyalties Lie," and "Vengeance is Sweet!" I must warn you though, Vengeance is hard for most people because he's quite hard and Hermione, being in love, loses herself for a few chapters. So, undoubtedly she won't be up to your standards, but I maintain love makes people put up with some things they wouldn't normally put up with, having been there myself. Overly fluffy, yes, as per popular request, and I loved it! Draco and Ginny and kid turned out well. I had intended to do a little funny story with Ron, but I never did.

Velvet2005.07.30 - 06:05AM17: EpilogueSigned
Aww!! I loved this story and have been waiting for this since u finished it! And i loved it! Thank you sooo much u've made my night! =)

Author's Response: thanks so much! i'm glad you enjoyed it! I have some others you may like. Cheers

Cherdy the Molologist2005.07.14 - 10:54PM17: EpilogueSigned
The idea of the Gigolo challenge never really appealed to me, but when this came up I decided to give it a go. A good summary is all it takes to suck me in. And thank goodness for the 'random fic' button! I love that thing! This has provided me with a lovely evening of reading, and for that I thank you. I'm sure it took much longer for you to write and put together, and I appreciate that. See you on the other side of HBP!

Author's Response: i LOVE the gigolo challenges, and I have two takes on it. Of course, Vengeance is nothing like this and not really a gigolo tale. I'm glad you like this though. My other tale is just now completed as well if you've the time or inclination. Cheers! xoxoox

PANDORA RIDDLE2005.06.27 - 06:46PM12: Weekend: Part TwoSigned
Cool. Sexy. Ever ready. Someone fine. Always steady. Gentle hands, dirty mind, use your head, and don't be blind. ...... What's the hard rush no urgency you see. Crazy boy potential lover. First and lover brotha a'int no other. Crazy Sexy Cool but racy steady ready go Yes! These lyrics just popped in my head from an old pop group im ashamed to say who but if you guess go ahead. That reminded me of the story

Author's Response: LOL!! Thanks for the lyrics. Unfortunately, I cannot place the band or title! :)

Nichalia2005.06.24 - 10:05PM17: EpilogueSigned
Yay! What a nice story.

Author's Response: thanks, glad you liked it

quaryn2005.06.21 - 01:57PM17: EpilogueSigned
I stuck with the story all the way through, but in the end I felt disappointed. I felt like neither Hermione nor Severus were well-portrayed.

Author's Response: Ah, well. Sorry to hear that. I don't find that either we very characteristic, but I feel that's mostly because of the challenge I was trying to follow. Too bad you continued to read though. 17 chapters is a long time, and I hate that you wasted your time. The good thing? Many others liked it. So...cheers! Hope you find something up to you standard. JKR's book will be out soon enough.

Selene2005.04.13 - 08:12PM17: EpilogueSigned
whee! i love this story! i decided to read this one while waiting for the succubus, which, btw, i'm dying to finish...

Author's Response: thanks! glad you liked it. Succubus has just been completed and sent to my beta. it took a long time for me to get to b/c i had company and then hated to see it end. But, I wrote it today. It's very interesting. :)

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