Reviews for Libertine
Kaylee | 2005.02.11 - 09:22PM | 11: Weekend: Part One | Signed |
oh bugger well there goes the scar well part of it. sigh wonderful lemons. thanks for the wonderful chapter
Author's Response: Thanks so much... more up soon |
pickles | 2005.02.11 - 08:28PM | 11: Weekend: Part One | Signed |
you make me wish hubby wasn't pulling a 24 hr shift. oh well.
Author's Response: teehee!!! good lord 24 hours? I thought my hubby's 13 hour days were bad... here... have some chocolate.. lol |
Betz | 2005.02.11 - 08:20PM | 11: Weekend: Part One | Signed |
How is it you can read my mind. I've always wanted to write a first-time experience during a rain-lightning storm. I even had one cookig in my mind for a fic and you go and write it. It was really hot the way you wrote it, romantic, spontaneous, passionate, intense. I really loved it. I got a gut feeling this Lonnie issue won't rest. Can you say psycho-stalker? So they want each other forever? Why do I see a big fight coming that will question if they still want each other or they will think that it's off? Just a feeling. Sex in the ocean...doesn't that sting? Hot tubs, pools, sure, but salt water? Another great chapter, (SIIIIiiiiiiiiiiiggghhh!) Got a cigarette?
Author's Response: actually, no it doesn't sting.. lol (whistles) of course, maybe after your first time lol. i hadn't thought about that.. blast!
I don't know where that stormy scene came from. i was gonna have them begin to start up things on the cliff and apparate back to the bed, but as i was writing the walk i said.. hmmm... then i had read about quickly changing weather and such.. so i said.. hey? why not put some rain? lol
no reason why you can't play a little rainy sex ... muahahhaaha I know I would be right there along with everyone else reading it! About a fight, yes, indeed. it won't be nice for about a chapter or so, but hey...i'm a sap at heart..they'll end up fine lol.. but lonnie does make an appearance. Passes Betz a Marlboro |
Questa_Witch | 2005.02.11 - 08:18PM | 11: Weekend: Part One | Signed |
wonderful, but I have come to expect nothing less. :)
Author's Response: thanks, doll! xoxoxoox |
toryvic | 2005.02.11 - 07:44PM | 11: Weekend: Part One | Signed |
Crikey, blimey (and lots of other mild words of surprise that don't spring to mind)
that was a blimming great chapter, Snape and Hermione must have been very tired after their exertions, it was knackering just reading about it!!!
I've got a feeling that it might not be straight away but sooner or later there's going to be a bit of a nasty confrontation when Hermione learns the truth about Libertine/Severus...I like a nice heated argument (as long as nobody cries) and I'm sure you'll do a great job.
oh, and I noticed that you'd done a bit of research, as soon as there was a sudden rainspell...ah the famous British weather, the ruiner of many a trip to the seaside!!!
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: yep, there will be a bit of fireworks display sooner than later, but not until after they have a brilliant weekend. hehe.. i needed to do that research lol to make it sound at least a bit real .. hehehe... glad you noticed! more up soon. |
Stormi | 2005.02.11 - 07:36PM | 11: Weekend: Part One | Signed |
Wonderful chapter! Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! More up soon! cheers! |
Winna | 2005.02.11 - 07:34PM | 11: Weekend: Part One | Signed |
Heh. I did that chest hair thing to my husband once. Good chapter, nice lemons. Hermione is soooo close to figuring things out! I do hope they have a happy week-end before all secrets are revealed.
Author's Response: yeppers they will! but she's thinking about things now at least. lol @ chest hair stuff! poor fellow. (giggles) |
slytherin0louise | 2005.02.11 - 07:16PM | 11: Weekend: Part One | Signed |
brill chapter,,, update quick
Author's Response: thanks. more soon |
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