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DayLightDancer2005.02.20 - 08:04PM15: Time ApartSigned
oh god that last chapter had me in tears.... sniffsniff im glad there getting better tho!! YAY!!

Author's Response: awww poor doll... sends kleenex to you... all will be well. hehe

Fictionlover_322005.02.20 - 05:52PM15: Time ApartSigned
I'm so glad they're on their way to reconilation, but I felt that things could've been more easier if Snape took the action first. After all, he did mess things up, didn't he? He was supposed to ask Hermione for her forgivness. Isn't that the right thing to do? But no. He decided his pride was more important than his love for Hermione. So far, I've noticed that Snape hasn't apologized yet, and yet Hermione apologized numerous times and yet Snape couldn't accept Hermione right away. This shows that Snape doesn't trust Hermione completely. What is that for a relationship? I hope in the next chapter, Hermione will get an apologize from Snape because what is he did was wrong in the end. I feel it's better if they took things slowly this time. I think they were falling in love so fast that it didn't give them any chance to get to know each other completely. But apart from that, I'm glad they're making progress. Update soon! Cheers!

Author's Response: yes, all things already in the works for next chapter. thought i had alluded to that... glad you liked a small bit of it at least cheers more up soon

Author's Response: k. i decided to come back and yak some more. i was a bit annoyed first go round.
yes, snape was wrong but she was no better in the end either. they both were wrong. snape is proud and feels that apologizing is admiting weakness. And, no, he doesnt fully trust her. he would like to, but he is afraid that she'll just hurt him again. He knows what he did was wrong and has admitted that. Hermione's pride was in the way as well. she wouldn't have gone to him either if she hadn't have 'run' into him on accident. harry had been trying to get her to go. It's more like he went to her. Think he just happened to be out at the lake? no. he was hoping for something.
And, as i had her say a couple of times, they needed to take things slowly (not that they didnt get to know each other before now; just because we don't see every little conversation doesn't mean they don't have them). I simply mentioned how much they had learnt...etc..
Again, these are all things that will be answered and brought up in my final chapter (the long one that will have all loose ends nice and tied up). Thanks for reading and cheers.

Kaylee2005.02.20 - 04:44PM15: Time ApartSigned
Don't care if it's short! WAHOOO!!!!!! Thank You!

Author's Response: thank you!! and you're welcome! cheers! next will be up soon

LariLee2005.02.20 - 04:19PM15: Time ApartSigned
Well, I'm glad things are working out. Going to be interesting when Lonnie pops up. :-)
~Lisa

Author's Response: teehee!! thanks! it should be up tomorrow

Lana Manckir2005.02.20 - 04:19PM15: Time ApartSigned
Wow next chapter promises to be even better than this! At some point, I wanted to go there and smack Severus upside the head. Stubborn man! But I'm glad everything turned out better in the end. Can't wait to see what's Lonnie up to ;-)

Author's Response: thanks, doll! it'll be nice and have a happy ending. the bit with lonnie will be interesting hehe...

Keladry Lupin2005.02.20 - 04:01PM15: Time ApartSigned
Ah, reconciliation. Sounds wonderful. Let's hex Lonnie into next week, shall we?

Author's Response: muahahaha... sounds good! hehe... it'll be cute

pickles2005.02.20 - 03:56PM15: Time ApartSigned
thank you for a new chapter. excellent. but does lonnie actually know what snape looks like? or could ron play the part??? lol

Author's Response: lonnie has no idea what he really looks like.. lol! it'll be funny.. muahahaha and thanks, doll

Miri Tiazan2005.02.20 - 03:50PM15: Time ApartSigned
Whoah. That was a lot happening in one chapter. Have to digest that a bit.

Author's Response: i didnt find it was a lot happening. only a few different scenes. i thought it went nicely. on another note, the next chapter is very long. lots of things happening there as well. sorry? lol cheers it'll tie up some loose ends and such thanks

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