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Reviews for Libertine

Nimue2005.02.24 - 10:20PM16: Moving ForwardSigned
I just found this story, and it was very delightful. I couldn't leave the compy until I'd finished it. An epilogue would be nice! Very nice smut, by the way. Very well written.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm always nervous about writing smut. I ask my beta all the time, "Is it ok?" hehe... glad you enjoyed the story, cheers!

SnivellusSnape2005.02.24 - 05:29PM16: Moving ForwardSigned
-flails- JUMP ON THE BALL!!! I wan an epilogue! I am sooooooooo shocked that it's ended already. Please, please, please!!!

Author's Response: sorry?! hehe.. i hated to draw it out more than i needed to, but i will put an epilogue up. cheers! and thanks

joots2005.02.24 - 04:07PM16: Moving ForwardSigned
Loved the whole story. Thank you for sharing it with us!

Author's Response: thanks so much!! i appreciate it

zambonigirl2005.02.24 - 03:18PM16: Moving ForwardSigned
And here's the last chapter. No! You can't end it like this! I insist that you write me an epilogue and have it posted to my journal in three days!

Okay, all that aside, this was a great story, and I think you wrapped it up nicely. Severus and Hermione are obviously comfortable talking to each other now, and they will always have this little "incident" to remind them to continue to practice good communication skills. I didn't think that you rushed the smut at all, though I don't think I'd want to be walked in on by house elves...heh...poor kids...

Anyway, think about an epilogue. After all, they're engaging in teh madz sexorz! And Ron's started his own little side business. This whole story was funny and dramatic in equal and correct amounts, and I can't wait to read more from you.

Author's Response: i'll write a little something..teehee. i'm glad you liked it. spying house elves..teehee... i'll prob put a little something up for an epilogue. make it fun! cheers and thnx!

zambonigirl2005.02.24 - 03:14PM15: Time ApartSigned
Hey, sorry it's taken me so long to feed you with a review, but I printed the last two chapters out and read them the past couple of days. This is a great chapter. I totally understand what they're going through emotionally, and you don't have random POV shifts. You're wearing just a bit on my Ron Love Sensibilities (so are the movies-Ron's a good guy! He's just lazy), but you're the author, and I'm just happy that you didn't turn him into an abusive rapist. Okay. That's for that chapter.

Author's Response: No way!! hehe... i do like ron, but not with hermione..muahahaha... i like when they are all friendly though. thanks!!

Lasaire2005.02.24 - 03:07PM15: Time ApartSigned
A nice chapter, and I'm glad to see that there's a chance for teh two to reconcile. However, I feel the need to point out for verisimilitudes sake that a bottle of whiskey has 18 shots in it. That's enough to KILL someone of alchohol poisoning. If Harry, Ron, and Snape finished one single bottle between the three of them, they'd all be very drunk. For Snape to drink almost two by himself is pushing the bounds.

Author's Response: I dunno... I drink a bottle of jack by myself when i go out... of course it's only what, 80 proof? if you feel better, we'll just pretend that it's some sappy whisky of lesser quality.. Is fiction.. go with it!

Barbara2005.02.24 - 02:59PM16: Moving ForwardSigned
That is really a nice story you wrote. I enjoyed every bit of it. Thank you for hours of pleasurable reading ...

Author's Response: i'm so glad that you liked it! cheers, doll!!

Questa_Witch2005.02.24 - 02:29PM16: Moving ForwardSigned
aaww :) naughty 'mione.....yay I'm glad they are back together...

Author's Response: muahahahha indeed! hehe

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