|
Recently Added | Categories | Titles | Completed Fics | Random Fic | Search | Top Fictions |
| loreen77 | 2012.02.05 - 09:15AM | 1: Facets | Signed |
| Nice job! Author's Response: Thanks! | |||
| Fozzywacca | 2011.10.21 - 01:34AM | 1: Facets | Signed |
| I love Haiku. Good attempt.
I always write mine 5-7-5
My computer tells
Its screen a window to see
Stories to Kill time
Author's Response: Haiku are so much more challenging than I expected, and I thank you for taking the time to read my first (and only) attempt. | |||
| alien_duck | 2007.07.29 - 08:20PM | 1: Facets | Signed |
| Very appropriate poetry for Snape. Reads nicley, but even better out loud. Good work. Author's Response: Thanks so much! It's a style I'd never attempted before. There are a couple I actually still like. Thanks for reminding me this was here. | |||
| Soul Bound | 2006.10.01 - 04:33AM | 1: Facets | Anonymous |
| Oh, wow...that was really beautiful. "none suspect I hold you dear" - very sweet, thank you. :) Author's Response: You're very kind. Thank you so much for leaving me a comment on my foray into poetry. | |||
| kamelia | 2006.08.12 - 01:02AM | 1: Facets | Signed |
| you have done a very nice job with your poetry Bambu.... if only I could be so talented....
~kamelia~ Author's Response: You are most kind, kamelia. It was just a little bit of doodling when I was trying to find what I do best. I figured I needed to try everything. Thank you. | |||
| Snarky4Severus | 2006.06.29 - 09:18PM | 1: Facets | Signed |
| I only wish that my successes could turn out as well as you "defects". Were I but so lucky. Sigh. Author's Response: You're very kind, and I appreciate the encouragement. | |||
| Aurora | 2005.08.25 - 03:35AM | 1: Facets | Anonymous |
| Quite nice. You've captured the essence of Snape very concisely. Don't worry about rigid adherence to the form; poetry is all about expanding vision, not conformity to rules. Author's Response: Aurora, I appreciate your comments. Your encapsulation about poetry is well worth thinking about. Perhaps I will try my hand at it again one of these days. You're very thoughtful to take the time to comment. Thank you. | |||
| wisteriarose | 2005.04.06 - 04:40AM | 1: Facets | Signed |
| Awesome imagery and word usage; especially for your first attempt at Haiku. You are correct in your assumption that the rhyming couplet would be considered a defect (and my first attempt got returned by my teacher with a "0" for rhyming). I still think you encompassed the spirit of haiku, though: few words with a powerful (dynamic) image. Author's Response: You are very kind, wisteriarose. I think I'm probably a hybrid at heart and couldn't quite help myself from the deviation. I really appreciate your lovely compliment. Thank you. | |||
Terms of Use
Credits
Ashwinder
A Severus Snape/Hermione Granger archive in the Harry Potter universe
Copyright © 2003-2019 Sycophant Hex
All rights reserved