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| Brooklynhills97 | 2018.01.09 - 05:12AM | 1: Damaged Goods | Signed |
| I’m so sorry you went through this. Oh gosh, I don’t know what to say | |||
| joan_glover | 2013.05.21 - 10:08AM | 1: Damaged Goods | Signed |
| As I read both Persistence of Phoenixes and Damaged Goods, I had the same thought: Kyerie is a poet in fanfic clothing. Thank you for your sensitivity, your willingness to share, your insights, and the beauty of your writing. | |||
| thebells | 2007.09.15 - 09:17PM | 1: Damaged Goods | Signed |
| Well written. I feel this could easily be Hermione's voice in a few of the stories I've read here thus far. | |||
| BuckeyeBelle | 2007.06.22 - 11:42AM | 1: Damaged Goods | Signed |
| I too have learned to be stronger in the broken places. I do not know your circumstances but understand this, your poem could have spoken for me YEARS AGO. Time passes and, though we never forget, life can fill that terrible emptiness with joy and peace once we find the courage to reach out and let it. Trust may become something that we choose to do against our better judgment, but it does become a choice available to us once again. Blessed be. | |||
| Guinnevere | 2005.12.24 - 03:24AM | 1: Damaged Goods | Signed |
| The poem is effectively done, but good God, what an awful betrayal of trust it signifies. I'm so sorry for the truth this piece denotes, but the honesty of the telling makes it very powerful. Good work. | |||
| Cherdy the Molologist | 2005.07.23 - 09:59PM | 1: Damaged Goods | Signed |
| wow. very good. speechless at your words... Author's Response: Thank you. | |||
| enchanter | 2005.03.14 - 05:46PM | 1: Damaged Goods | Signed |
| "Naught but flesh, no mind within./'Tis what he made of me."
I've felt this way sometimes, though I've mostly managed to untagle myself from the circumstances that make me feel so. That really wasn't what I needed to say when I thought to review, though. I just wanted to mention that the language used, while difficult in someplaces, really accentuates the fact that you (and she) really are scholars; this poem leaves a reader in no doubt that there is a fine mind and being beyond the external (which in this case is embodied by the poem). Thank you for sharing it with us. I hope your future holds better things for you. Author's Response: Thank you very much. Both for the analysis and compliments on my writing, and for the well wishes. I wish the best for you as well. | |||
| Maggie | 2005.01.15 - 09:21AM | 1: Damaged Goods | Signed |
| Powerful! Author's Response: Thank you. | |||
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