Reviews for Mistakes Men Make
| Jong_Kahn | 2013.02.19 - 03:37PM | 1: Chapter 1—Miscommunication | Signed |
| Heh! Both of you are speechless, am I right Professor Snape? |
| bainbridgita | 2011.10.20 - 06:41PM | 1: Chapter 1—Miscommunication | Signed |
| This was the best story here I've read so far. The few moments of confused silence when S. sees H. were written so well, phrased so perfectly, that I had to stop reading and just laugh and picture Allen Rickman acting the part .The rest of the story, where the consequences were not so funny, worked really well too. |
| mneme | 2011.02.28 - 04:48AM | 1: Chapter 1—Miscommunication | Signed |
| Your story expresses well the injustice that can occur in a misunderstanding like the one you wrote about. Only it does not fit with this set of characters, or at least not Hermione. While your portrayal of Snape is not glaringly OOC, your portrayal of Hermione completely off. I think you miss a quintessential characteristic of Gryffindors: courage. Given her behavior with regards to House Elves, once she learns of Snape's consequences due to her behavior, she would have publicly defended and championed Snape. |
| tilly | 2008.06.26 - 02:51PM | 1: Chapter 1—Miscommunication | Signed |
| A brave story! I enjoy WIKTT style stories as much as anyone, but definitely from an adult perspective which clearly places SSHG in the realm of fantasy romance. Your fic is a good reminder of the realism of this kind of storyline, which counterpoints well with other fanfics, and is a good reminder of why cannon is HGRW not HGSS. |
| SamJonesy | 2008.04.02 - 09:28PM | 1: Chapter 1—Miscommunication | Signed |
| Hahaha! How funny!! |
| rudolfi0 | 2008.02.14 - 05:25AM | 1: Chapter 1—Miscommunication | Signed |
| loved it!
fantastic plot bunny!
happy valentine by the way |
| FlorWS | 2007.07.28 - 08:01PM | 1: Chapter 1—Miscommunication | Signed |
| Hehe! That was a great first chapter! |
| Guinnevere | 2005.12.19 - 11:06PM | 1: Chapter 1—Miscommunication | Signed |
| Oh, Lord... This may not be targeted as a funny story, but the image of Severus doing a double-take as he realizes that Hermione is standing in his classroom naked just has me lol. |
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