Reviews for Hero
| aakmlee | 2021.08.30 - 10:14PM | 6: Severus | Signed |
| This is one of my favorite stories, nicely done! |
| mysterygirl124 | 2018.08.26 - 10:54AM | 6: Severus | Signed |
| i love this! It melts my heart to see Severus letting his vulnerable side show, and i love how you ended it. Great job! |
| loreen77 | 2018.07.11 - 09:38AM | 6: Severus | Signed |
| Awww. That was great. So sweet. So much promise. I choose to imagine a friendship forms as they work for the order together after she graduates..... and maybe someday more. |
| loreen77 | 2018.07.11 - 09:01AM | 1: Hermione | Signed |
| Poor Hagrid. I enjoyed the idea of Severus spinning around without his normal grace as he was startled. You don’t often see an author be able to create a situation where’s Snape being caught off guard feels authentic. But it does here. Great start. |
| Jong_Kahn | 2015.10.11 - 01:23AM | 3: Hermione | Signed |
| It didn't occur to her to light a fire in Hagrid's fireplace to try to use the floo? No matter--you needed her to leave the hut in order to proceed with your story. Carry on! |
| Jong_Kahn | 2015.10.11 - 01:23AM | 6: Severus | Signed |
| Very nicely done, and much appreciated! Perfect as it stands. |
| Jong_Kahn | 2015.10.11 - 01:04AM | 3: Hermione | Signed |
| It didn't occur to her to light a fire in Hagrid's fireplace to try to use the floo? No matter--you needed her to leave the hut in order to proceed with your story. Carry on! |
| Jong_Kahn | 2015.10.11 - 12:52AM | 1: Hermione | Signed |
| Good prompt for the story--well chosen! |
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