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Reviews for Restraint

miss3y2005.01.16 - 07:36PM4: A Fish Out of WaterSigned
ooo... interesting. I will be looking forward to the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, miss3y! :)

pickles2005.01.10 - 03:58PM3: The Call of DutySigned
where in time has she been sent? waiting for more. thank you.

Author's Response: You're welcome, pickles. As to where Hermione has been sent... *grins* You'll be finding that out soon. ;) Thanks for reviewing! :)

Armor2005.01.10 - 12:35PM3: The Call of DutySigned
It's a time turner story isn't it ? I always love those stories. But here, it's something different and very interesting. I can't wait for more chapters. Update soon

Author's Response: Yes, Armor, this is indeed a time turner story. With my own breed of insanity mingled into it. ;) The next chapter is being worked on as we speak. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)

Bambu2005.01.10 - 12:04PM3: The Call of DutySigned
This is a wonderfully constructed chapter. Running from the mundanity of office life to the urgency of battle to the brink of death. I've had several thoughts about whether Severus knows about the Time Turner (which is my suspicion) and why she carries it, and that it ties in with her nightmare... all of which are layered deftly in the story. Well done, AngelQueen.

Author's Response: *smiles* Thank you so much, Bambu, really. Severus does indeed know that Hermione is guarding the Time Turner-as evidenced at the end of the last chapter. And one can draw many speculations and conclusions from his reactions to it. Thank you so much for the thoughtful review! :)

lovethelab2005.01.04 - 05:20PM2: Birthdays and BreakfastSigned
Very interesting premise for a story - I am enjoying this - please continue!

Author's Response: I'm glad you've enjoyed the beginnings of my story, lovethelab. Thank you for your review!

LariLee2005.01.03 - 10:48PM2: Birthdays and BreakfastSigned
Very nice start, good bit about the time-turner (I think she'll need it).
~Lisa

Author's Response: Thank you again, Lisa!

pickles2005.01.03 - 10:40PM2: Birthdays and BreakfastSigned
another good chapter... thank you for updating.

Author's Response: Thanks, pickles. Chapter two should be up next week, barring any disasters occurring in real life. ;)

Bambu2005.01.03 - 10:38PM2: Birthdays and BreakfastSigned
I think time turner stories, regardless of how popular a device, are very difficult to do well. Very often the set up is lacking in depth and backstory, and the inherent difficulties with the 'return' to the present is rarely overcome. In this case, you've done a commendable job of layering your backstory with some dark overtones, but I particularly like the established relationship as a jumping off point. I look forward to seeing where you go with this, AngelQueen.

Author's Response: *blushes fiercely* Bambu, I always jump for joy when I see a review from you. They're always thoughtful and interesting, not to mention they give me plenty to think about in regards to the story and how I choose to take it where I want it to go. Thank you so much for that. I wanted to start out with an established relationship and have Hermione out beyond Hogwarts for a few reasons, one being that romance isn't the main focus of the story. Eventually, the title of the story will become clear. And I'm also glad you enjoyed the bits of the backstory that I cooked up. I must have edited it a thousand times before putting it up. Again, thanks so much for reviewing. :)

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