Reviews for Wicked Little Secrets
Jong_Kahn | 2013.08.07 - 02:01PM | 1: Part I-Secrets and Serum | Signed |
"...he conjured a goblet of wine for her to swallow,"--really? A teacher wouldn't get in trouble for giving alcohol to a student? I'm presuming the delays which slowed Albus, Poppy and Minerva on their way to the dungeons were variants of a "notice me not" spell. Cute idea, to have Severus and Hermione already be involved. |
Derelict Author | 2011.08.16 - 09:16PM | 1: Part I-Secrets and Serum | Signed |
This has been one of my favorite stories for awhile, and while recently rereading it, I noticed that you hadn't had a review since 2009... and that just won't do! Love this story forever and ever! I just noticed your author's note--is there still another vignette planned...?
Author's Response: lol, well i'll be damned. people still read this? i'm happy to hear it! you know, i actually wrote the other vignette, and it was HUUUGGGEEEE. too huge. my beta suggested i break it up into two separate vignettes at the time, and then i started to do that, but lost steam. :/ the first, er, second, might be finished. i'll have to dig around and see what i can see. i write under a different author name now and i'm cringing at this smutlet, heh. either way, this made my day. thanks, sweet reader. :) |
Half Blood Outcast | 2009.07.14 - 01:34AM | 1: Part I-Secrets and Serum | Signed |
now THAT was entertaining!. . . and hot. lol, wonderful job!
Author's Response: Hey thanks! *curtsies* |
somebodyoranother | 2008.09.12 - 02:04AM | 1: Part I-Secrets and Serum | Signed |
Nice lemony twist
Author's Response: Thank you! The second vignette is currently being beta'd. Will try to get that up soon. |
LilithTavari | 2008.05.24 - 03:21AM | 1: Part I-Secrets and Serum | Signed |
Cute but a little short, you could have done more with the Veritaserum idea if you had drawn the plot out longer, and perhaps chosen to have Hermione and Snape uninvolved at the outset. Also, you really need to work on your grammar and mechanics... There were a few words in there that weren't words, or were used out of context. If you don't have a beta, find one. If you do, find a better one.
Author's Response: Re: editing--Tell me about it. :( It has been fixed, and vignette 2 is forthcoming. Thanks for the constructive crit. :) |
Mint Stick | 2007.11.26 - 02:46AM | 1: Part I-Secrets and Serum | Signed |
A most enjoyable story. :-D Thanks!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Thank you for reviewing. :) |
barbied011 | 2007.09.10 - 10:16PM | 1: Part I-Secrets and Serum | Signed |
I loved this story. So cute with great lemons.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you. |
willowywitch | 2006.09.09 - 01:43AM | 1: Part I-Secrets and Serum | Signed |
hehehheheheehehehe me likey hehehehehehehehe i especially like the poppy, dumbledore, mcgonagall conversation.
Author's Response: lol, thank you. |
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