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| hpfanfic | 2004.12.27 - 09:18AM | 4: Cloudy Day's End | Anonymous |
| This was a lovely, well-crafted story. Carefully paced, with just the right amount of dramatic flourishes. Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you for the lovely compliments, hpfanfic. I was a bit unsure of the pacing in a few places, especially in the last chapter, but if you enjoyed it, then I must have done something correctly! *smiles* Thank you for reviewing! | |||
| Armor | 2004.12.27 - 06:00AM | 4: Cloudy Day's End | Signed |
| I don't what to say. This story is so sad. I hope she will find some confort and joy with Blaise but she will be Severus' for ever.
Though I don't want this future... What can you write now ? Was this chapter the end of you story ? Author's Response: Yes, this is the end of this story. I do have one or two other plot bunnies setting up shop in my mind, so hopefully I shall have something up for your viewing pleasure in the near future. However, RL is about to intercede and my holiday is soon coming to an end. But I shall do my best. Thank you for reviewing, Armor. | |||
| June W | 2004.12.27 - 04:23AM | 4: Cloudy Day's End | Signed |
| Sigh ... (reader dabs hanky, sniffles) ... are you going to show us Severus' view of what he thinks of her words? Does Blaise have his own visits to the cemetery to visit his mentor? Sigh again... I don't usually like sad stories (definitely not those with unhappy endings), but your story is so well-written that I hang on to each new chapter. It's a beautiful love story, despite the fact they never had a chance for romance in life. Thank you for the chapter!! Author's Response: *smiles* Thank you for your wonderful comments, June. No, there will be no new chapter from Severus' point of view and thoughts on Hermione's words, as tempting as it might be. But, as I've never read the thoughts of the dead, I do not feel as if it is my place to presume to understand their thought processes. As for Blaise, well, he's a very mysterious young man. Doesn't talk much, not even to me. I am unsure if he visits his old Head of House, though, personally, I think its a fair bet. I think many of the survivors of the War take time to visit those that were lost. Thank you for reading this little story, June. Your comments and questions have always been thought-provoking and interesting! Thank you for your reviews! | |||
| Bambu | 2004.12.23 - 05:11PM | 3: What Has Come Before | Signed |
| You wrung the emotion out of that scene beautifully, it's just heartbreaking. Such a tragedy that of the Trio, the one who's heart's prayer wasn't answered is Hermione. I particularly liked her frantic 'I do not find this at all amusing!' It's such a telling phrase. Author's Response: Thank you so much, Bambu. I'm glad you liked Hermione's exclamation of mounting panic. I was a little unsure about the line, so to see that you like it is wonderful for me! Happy holidays and thank you for reviewing! :) | |||
| Armor | 2004.12.23 - 03:28AM | 3: What Has Come Before | Signed |
| It's so sad. There's no hope here... But I'm not disappointed because your story is so beautiful.
Update soon. Author's Response: Thank you, Armor. I'm afraid you're right, however. There is no hope for our dear couple here. But she holds him in her heart, and he'll never be forgotten by her... nor by the Potters, considering the name for one of the boys. ;) Thank you for reviewing! | |||
| greenwood | 2004.12.22 - 11:40PM | 3: What Has Come Before | Signed |
| Beautifuly written..If this is not the end (I can only hope it is not) please keep going. Author's Response: Thank you very much, greenwood! This is definitely not the end! I'm not sure how much longer it will go on, but there will be at least one more chapter, perhaps two. It really depends on how everything is balanced out. Thanks for reviewing! | |||
| QueneArual | 2004.12.22 - 11:07PM | 3: What Has Come Before | Signed |
| DAMN LUCIUS MALFOY!!!!! 10/10 Author's Response: Truer words have never been spoken, my dear. Thank you for your review! :) | |||
| droxy | 2004.12.22 - 09:18PM | 3: What Has Come Before | Signed |
| Nicely written death scene. So sad, not even kissed. Author's Response: Thanks so much, droxy. I did feel rather miserable when I'd finished this chapter, for being so cruel. Thanks for your review! | |||
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